The Way to A Woman's Heart

The Way to A Woman's Heart

A Poem by Frieda P

If you're looking
   for the way to a woman's heart
     you're using the wrong entrance
don't cry a river
        cue the head instead
coo a tender love song~
           the love organ
                   to the shimmy
                         generally,
                             plays between the ears

       


© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Hmmm, why didn't I think of that? Very nice my sweet friend.


If it’s music you want
Then why not just say it
My piano is sitting
Just begging I play it

A tune in my head
Romantic indeed
Scattered with passion
To fill every need

The keys I would tickle
If you would just smile
Melodies bloom
In a passionate style

It is so much easier
Than roses and wine
If I could play music
And you would be mine



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woo, I just fainted & swooned simultaneously. ;-) Amazing how fast you can come up with these Jack... read more
Cassie

11 Years Ago

This was Jacks response, you are really a poet Jack
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I know, he's pretty dang amazing...........



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My sentiments exactly. I find much more pleasure in the intellect of a woman than from a meaningless, should I say; romp in the hay. Stick to those guns lady with the with a soul of gold.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"the love organ to the shimmy generally, plays between the ears"

I know this is true. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Justaguy

11 Years Ago

or, as I prefer to look at it. Women KNOW when to shut up, but sometimes choose to say something el.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha smartarse...when women say what, it's not because she they didn't hear you, she's giving you a se.. read more
Justaguy

11 Years Ago

LMAO!! Well said Maam!!
god, this is perfect....we can only hope the way to a woman's heart is to respect and love her mind more than anything else...the rest is gravy...but the eyes and what is between the ears? that is the sexiest.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

A man who knows his stuff, thanks muchly jacob!
Surely you were gonna tell me about this one at some point, Mrs.R? ;) Maybe you knew I'd take time to recover from the last one...I wish I had a poem to answer with but I'm too busy grinning goofily...short and sweet, like me actually...xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I wanted it to be a surprise...recovered yet Benji? ;-) x
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I think I did, until now as I read it again ;) xo
I always thought a nice dark chocolate simmered in a warm breeze of a subtle breath, woven with an embracing moment of fireside flickerings would be what it took to weave the sweet sparks of heart into the forever bath of a midnight moon?

While I truly believe the key is inside the mind, I don't think George can come close to doing it justice for me! lol

Thanks for sharing your ink! =D

Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha very cool review Arron, George doesn't do it for me either, actually you're more his type. ;-) T.. read more
A hearty AMEN to this, Frieda! Well said, and so true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'll second that, thanks Rita!
Sing it sister ...................................................

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha believe me, you don't want to hear me sing..........................
Oh, yes, the brain is an errogenous zone, you know it, Frieda. Good love advice for sure. I liked this. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Lydi, I know you know this, you know who it's for. ;-) ....
Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Hmmmm...intriguing!
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ron
This is so true. This should be requiered reading in school.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I'll see what I can about that, thanks ron..........
ron

11 Years Ago

Your welcome.
Baby Richchet needs to read this...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'll have to send him an RR for this one....

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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