Another Coffee Senryu 2

Are you serious?

don't talk to me before coffee

it's like homicide

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Singing my tune! If you speak to me first thing in the morning I am not a happy person. Warned You'd think my in-laws would have learned this trait by now... :)

I must be infused with coffee and have about 30 minutes of silence (music is okay...) and then I transform into a lovely person that can carry on any kind of conversation... before that... witchy momma!

[Frieda P]

We should come with a warning sign, haha, thanks Sirrah. ;-)

[Emerald Seas]

The immediate family knows to stay clear! :)

[beautiful dreamer]

haha too true love it! i'm going to punch this thing it wont let me just say that so choo choo choo choo choo choo

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Haha You're getting good at this style, my friend. I come to your page and actually look for the senryu and haiku. This one...I can relate to. If you put Dr. Pepper in place of coffee, it would fit me like a warm glove :) Nicely done!

[Rita L. Sev]

LOL! I have that exact magnet on my fridge. Yep - it's a bad idea to speak to an uncaffeinated Sev... Funny, Frieda!

[Pryde Foltz]

Love coffee. It brings love to the world--my love. I feel like the Hulk. You wouldn't like me without my coffee. I hesitate to offer you a critique, because you rock, but I can't help but think homicide should be changed to suicide since the act is of another. Anyways, I trusting you've had your coffee. Wink.

[Frieda P]

You have a point there, you're just lucky I drank a pot today, haha thanks Pryde....*wink*

[Pryde Foltz]

hahahahahha

[Jack...]

Now you know why I come into the office so early, I'd hate to have to kill someone before the sun was up. Funny my friend.

[Frieda P]

Homicide is so much more acceptable once the sun is up....yep.

[Jack...]

Well I like to see what I am doing.

[Aethereal]

I enjoyed the theme of this coffee poem. Here's a free verse gift poem inspired by this one: It has 5/7/5 syllables.

Precariously
placing talk before coffee
invites homicide.

[Frieda P]

Show off Aethereal, I like yours better! Thanks muchly. :-)

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! I'm just having fun with words.

[Frieda P]

I know, I love it...still like yours better...........

[Aethereal]

When I write a poem about coffee here's how I do it:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Aethereal/1194650/

[Keith]

Yep.................................

[Frieda P]

Ha, I see you're serious about your coffee too....cheers.