~Moonlight Sonata To the Boudoir~

Speak to me in tender hushes of Chantilly lace

and the scent of black orchids in reason

wrap around my every sense so I might beg of thee,

take my hand gently and promenade me

for this dance of gentle embers burning

will surely swoon and seductively entice me

within the nectar of your tongue

and your refined humble graciousness

doth be kind my sweet,  feel mine luster ablaze

thou shan't not be regretful of salvation  

for with such gentlemanly verve of swagger

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir

wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz

hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors

I shall surrender my very soul to thee

on a bed of thorned roses inkind 

plunge me deeply into passion's flower

of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

Author's Note

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

The main difference between you and Beethoven Frieda is that you manage to blow my mind all the time when this is one of the only songs from Beethoven that move me. yes i said it this is my favorite Beethoven song and you are more consistent than him

for this dance of gentle embers burning
will surely swoon and seductively entice me
within the nectar of your tongue
and your refined humble graciousness

....my favorite part of this piece where the climb starts and the poem begins to exceed itself and live up to its potential if i'm being clear..really please tell me if I'm rambling

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir
wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz
hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors
I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

A non other but a totally badass ending that makes the previous my favorite quote from the piece. ties it together so the thought is complete and your intentions are focused instead of scattering themselves in a reader's mind . all in all a poem to be loved. well written, well captured, well done.
per usual

[Frieda P]

Wow Deron, I'm enthralled by your review here, don't know what to say, thanks so much my friend....x

[Angel]

Now, this is poetry at it's finest. Beethoven's beautiful Moonlight Sonata...lovely. I never suspected you of Shakespearean tendencies...what a happy surprise.
I am impressed...

[Frieda P]

No one was more shocked than I was Angel, seriously don't know where this came from and was worried about the wording, thanks muchly my sweet friend!

[Angel]

I hear Shakespeare himself is still wondering where Midsummer Night's Dream came from...

[Frieda P]

Ha I didn't know you guys were friends. ;-)

[Angel]

We have a few mutual acquaintances.

[Frieda P]

You must introduce me....

[Angel]

Well, Puck is a little shy...and Titania, the Queen of the Fairies is still embarrassed over the episode with Bottom...and Oberon, the arrogant Fairy King doesn't talk to many mortals...but I'll do what I can...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. A peaceful trip into amazing words and music.
"take my hand gently and promenade me
for this dance of gentle embers burning
will surely swoon and seductively entice me
within the nectar of your tongue"
The above lines are perfect. Touch and taste lead us to wonderful places. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, thrilled you liked this one...

[icelandicblue]

To be tattooed with love...how very intense. Love the sensuality of this one Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille blue....

[Horizon K.]

Wow, someone is in a good place these days:D. So romantic and sensual! A swoon-worthy and leaving me breathless piece Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Wow Horizon, thanks so much, breathless, I love it!

[annie lee]

What a sensuous and lyrical poem to accompany one of my favorite pieces of music! You have mastered the evocative mood here, and I am left a little weak, trembling at the depth of the emotion. Lovely.

[Frieda P]

Always love reading your reviews minichinz, thanks so much, glad you enjoyed this one, since I was a bit hesitant about it to begin with, you've made my day!

[Mrs.Murs]

woah, this is so cool, dood. i love it.

[redflutterby]

Swoon....breathtaking lines of sweet nostalgia. Tender romance blooms like the most delicate flower... Beautiful!!

[Frieda P]

Woo I made Red swoon, that's a review in and of itself, thanks! :-)

[Jack...]

Always you amaze me, each time I feel I've found that one, that poem of yours that I consider my favorite you come along and place another before my eyes that just blows me away. Honestly I feel there is no end to your talent and creativity. The beauty of your words blooms like a spring garden and never ends. This poem is much different for you, but oh so beautiful. Frieda, you are an amazing woman, my eyes find so much in your words each and every day. How you do it is my question, please never stop is my request.

[Frieda P]

You've made this much too early morning worth being awake for my friend, thanks so much, you humble me with your words Jack.

[Jack...]

And you beautify my day with your always amazing poetry.

[Frieda P]

Big smile here, thanks again :-)

[kublakhan27]

This is definitely my cuppa tea Mrs.R ;P It's one of the best things you've done, maybe the best if I think about it for a while...you've captured the spirit of many literary eras here, probably more than you realize...masterpiece, library, nuff said...xo

[Frieda P]

I'm channelling your Shakespearean influence I think Benji, I don't even read the stuff, have no clue where this one came from, so jazzed you enjoyed it, woo, masterpiece, this one is getting bronzed! :-) xo

[kublakhan27]

I guess you were just destined to write an epic Mrs.R ;) xo

[Frieda P]

Oh my Benji, now you're making my head swell for sure... xo

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow... You have out done yourself with this piece. An instant classic for me. Your words, so delicate and sincere spoke to me like a long-time lover. Amazing write!

[Frieda P]

Wow am enthralled by your review poetic heroics, wasn't too sure about this one, this makes me feel immensely better about it, thanks so much!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

You should feel great about this one... I've read it over several times, and each time my slows just a bit till I finish. You truly have showcased your ability; your seat among the elite writers here is well deserved!

[Frieda P]

Holy cats hon, my head isn't going to fit through the cafe door soon if you keep this up, truly humbled my friend...!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Its all well deserved truth.