~Moonlight Sonata To the Boudoir~

Speak to me in tender hushes of Chantilly lace

and the scent of black orchids in reason

wrap around my every sense so I might beg of thee,

take my hand gently and promenade me

for this dance of gentle embers burning

will surely swoon and seductively entice me

within the nectar of your tongue

and your refined humble graciousness

doth be kind my sweet,  feel mine luster ablaze

thou shan't not be regretful of salvation  

for with such gentlemanly verve of swagger

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir

wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz

hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors

I shall surrender my very soul to thee

on a bed of thorned roses inkind 

plunge me deeply into passion's flower

of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

Author's Note

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

The main difference between you and Beethoven Frieda is that you manage to blow my mind all the time when this is one of the only songs from Beethoven that move me. yes i said it this is my favorite Beethoven song and you are more consistent than him

for this dance of gentle embers burning
will surely swoon and seductively entice me
within the nectar of your tongue
and your refined humble graciousness

....my favorite part of this piece where the climb starts and the poem begins to exceed itself and live up to its potential if i'm being clear..really please tell me if I'm rambling

tis a promise of redemption's flourish in the boudoir
wandering from a dance of a honey'd waltz
hence a tumultuous romp of enraptured harbors
I shall surrender my very soul to thee
on a bed of thorned roses inkind
plunge me deeply into passion's flower
of wildered a'waiting breathless blossoms

A non other but a totally badass ending that makes the previous my favorite quote from the piece. ties it together so the thought is complete and your intentions are focused instead of scattering themselves in a reader's mind . all in all a poem to be loved. well written, well captured, well done.
per usual

[Frieda P]

Wow Deron, I'm enthralled by your review here, don't know what to say, thanks so much my friend....x

[Astro]

Grrrowr! Such colorful directness displayed in this one Frieda. I don't know how anyone could resist this sort of midnight performance. Good stuff. Hot.

[Tai Ryens]

A lullaby to the victor, whom your character deems superior over themself...

[Kleio13]

Beautiful one again Frieda

[TL Boehm]

Lovely Miss Frieda. It has that "old world" lilt and charm to it. A romantic, lush write. Written with a quill and folded up - sealed with a bit of wax...
Yes. a beautiful write.

[Frieda P]

'Sealed with a bit of wax...' I like that, thanks TL....

[LJW]

That's HOT.
I can't write this way. Can't even think this way. Certainly can't talk this way.

My husband gets, "You wanna play security guard again and catch me breaking in on the night shift? Don't forget the flashlight!"

[Frieda P]

Haha that made me laugh, thanks for the visit and review LJW...

[Ken Simm.]

Ahem, this is so, ahem, so wonderfully, er wotsit. So beautifully, er, ahem, excuse me a moment. So lovely er thingy. So, so, nice, er not nice, no I mean nice but more than nice, nice, more ahem, you know, er its a bit. No I mean its a lot, er ahem. It makes the wotsits stand up if you know what I mean. No, you won't will you I mean its ahem. Oh suck,boo and knickers its gorgeous. Now I'm going to lie down. I thank you.

[Frieda P]

Oh my, and I thought the music was stirring...In this moment, I love you with my whole entire heart Ken, you've made my day, thanks muchly. ;-)

[Ken Simm.]

Ahem. Oh well then. That's nice, er. Ahem I mean gosh! Er , (sucks his thumb now frantically) Er.

[Frieda P]

Ha, that nectar seems tongue tied love...

[Joyce S. Greene]

Very, very impressive, Frieda. Your words reflect the time of the painting your posted, and I was entranced by the language you used and the suggested amorous relationship between that couple.

Speak to me in tender hushes of Chantilly lace
and the scent of black orchids in reason

You have done just that in this poem and I am very happy I got a chance to read your work. Awesome, indeed!

[Frieda P]

Wow Joyce, thanks so much for this glowing review, I was really winging it with this one, hoping the wordage would work, so thrilled you enjoyed it..

[Joyce S. Greene]

I did, Frieda. It was a real treat.

[Rhiti Bose]

This beautiful magic you create with your words is so rich and mesmerising. You have such great talent Frieda....

[Frieda P]

Your kind words humble me Rhiti, thanks muchly....

[Cassie]

wow!!!!! thumbs up for doing this so beautifully this kind of style, i gave up, good good job. I will shelve

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Cassie and for the save too....