The musicality of this dances off of the page. It's beauty fills the air:
Bemused poesy
staining the skin
penetrating the heart
absorbed within ardent spirit,
life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind
I think this is my favorite of yours so far Frieda, it's so elegant and glides across the tongue. I especially like the advice inside it that almost whispers approval of a way your inner being is waltzing to an unheard melody, sure laugh it up, but I loved this, and I think you've reached something "more" with this one, not that all of your work isnt top notch, it's just more somehow, maybe just more to MY liking, lol
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
So jazzed Corset, glad you saw something 'more' in this one. Perhaps if poets ruled the world we'd f.. read moreSo jazzed Corset, glad you saw something 'more' in this one. Perhaps if poets ruled the world we'd finally have peace and harmony, what do you think? lol ;-)
11 Years Ago
quite right! Poets need to have free reign over the affairs of this world, then everything would be .. read morequite right! Poets need to have free reign over the affairs of this world, then everything would be colorful and smell like sonnets :P
You poems permeate all the senses with love and inspiration where you tickle even minds to love imagining the endless possibilities music and its effects on souls and how both will ascnd to the heavens...Splendid...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wow Sami, a splendid review indeed, thanks muchly :-)
"Know that in this soul lives music, for without music there is no soul"
Frieda, to fill our eyes with the beauty that is your words is likened to 1000 songbirds serenading us as we read. Melodically flow you words in this beautiful poetic offereing. Indeed, your poetry definitely penetrates our hearts, allowing us to feel and understand the amazing beauty that is you.
Very nicely done my sweet friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Is that another Jack quote, it's luverly. Your review is poetry to my ears, thanks so much my dear .. read moreIs that another Jack quote, it's luverly. Your review is poetry to my ears, thanks so much my dear friend....
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..