~Intent

Revel in your grace

take flight in the dance

bask in the sun

soak in salty sea of tears

sob for the plight

bathe in euphoria

exalt well-being,

stir in sensuality &

vital force of musicality

ascending the heavens

precious as air's

vehement breaths

Bemused poesy

staining the skin

penetrating the heart

absorbed within ardent spirit,

life revealed before our eyes

folded over neatly

waiting to be heralded

recognized by mankind

Ink permeates the page

floats unto the soul

of all those who listen 

intently....

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

The musicality of this dances off of the page. It's beauty fills the air:

Bemused poesy
staining the skin
penetrating the heart
absorbed within ardent spirit,
life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind

Simply gorgeous!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Anne, jazzed you enjoyed this one!

[Anand Sehgal]

life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind..

beautifully done

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anand....

[Barbara Walker]

Your intent comes through clearly, great syntax and flow. Music's sound can make us feel all the emotions experience can take us through. I believe we all have certain notes that vibrate with our soul's frequency, which is why maybe the drums can do it for me, while for someone else, it's the violin.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Barbara, glad you enjoyed it...

[ANTO]

Music is possibly the greatest gift that mankind possesses - its transcends borders and lifts the soul and this, your poetic homage to music rings in the mind as sweet as any aria.
Brilliant writing Frieda.
X

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Antee..........x

[Leslie Philibert]

This is for me even better than the last one from Frieda I reviewed, as the line length puts the imagery into a more concentrated form, this is very readable poetry of literary quality..

[Frieda P]

Wow Leslie, thanks so much..............

[KeeD]

Wow you put passion to an already passionate form of art.

Ink permeates the page
floats unto the soul
of all those who listen
intently....

Captivated by your words

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kee......

[Troy Henson]

A write that danced around my head as I read this one. Rolled so well off the tongue and was well balanced. Beauty is only skin deep and as penetrating as a tattoo is into our souls. A masterful piece Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Troy, your review is most gracious....

[B-poet]

Loved the picture you cared to grace with your written page of distinguished eloquence. Great work again Frieda. A fine & riveting write. :)

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed Bpoet, thanks so much :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

melodic poetry as always...but who will listen?

i hope more than just other poets....and if others listen, i hope it is intently...

because we are making sounds that need to be heard.

[Frieda P]

Thanks I hope so too jacob............

[Nkosana B Masuku]

I enjoyed reading this poem,so vivid a nd alive especialy the last part " Bemused poesy
staining the skin
penetrating the heart
absorbed within ardent spirit,
life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind
Ink permeates the page
floats unto the soul
of all those who listen
intently...."