~Intent

Revel in your grace

take flight in the dance

bask in the sun

soak in salty sea of tears

sob for the plight

bathe in euphoria

exalt well-being,

stir in sensuality &

vital force of musicality

ascending the heavens

precious as air's

vehement breaths

Bemused poesy

staining the skin

penetrating the heart

absorbed within ardent spirit,

life revealed before our eyes

folded over neatly

waiting to be heralded

recognized by mankind

Ink permeates the page

floats unto the soul

of all those who listen 

intently....

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

The musicality of this dances off of the page. It's beauty fills the air:

Bemused poesy
staining the skin
penetrating the heart
absorbed within ardent spirit,
life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind

Simply gorgeous!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Anne, jazzed you enjoyed this one!

[redflutterby]

What do poetry and music have in common? They both move us......physically and emotionally!! This dances on the page...

[Rebecca Buller]

Ink permeates the page
floats unto the soul
of all those who listen
intently...

Your poetry is a balm to the weary and tortured soul, Frieda. Thank you for taking us on a stroll through serenity.

[Astro]

Pretty cool Frieda, I like the opening as it feels a bit like a list of affirmations or prescribed desires. Then the middle a clever description wrapped in metaphor leading to a great ending with the title as its point. Well done friend.

[Kleio13]

This is significantly the best one i have read by you.
I believe this is where you make your mark.

[TL Boehm]

life folded over neatly. What a concept. a formidable write.

[Frieda P]

Seeing a lot of you today, thanks so much for the visits and your gracious review Tam...

[Mark]

The lines all stand alone yet are woven together to give us a picture. Well done.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille my friend..

[annie lee]

A lyrical recipe of words and music creating breathtaking images for this world or whatever comes after (and before.) Ink can record the musical notes and the poem's words, but only a magician can make them swirl into one and light up the sky.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words minichinz, muchly appreciated...

[Cassie]

I don't know but this sounds like a dance mostly Salsa, it is musical as well and I enjoyed reading it

[Frieda P]

Love the Salsa, thanks so much Sunshine.

[Rita L. Sev]

Revel in your grace
take flight in the dance...

From the first lines of this piece, there is rhythm and motion - your pen sings beautifully here, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for this glowing review Rita, muchly appreciated!

[kublakhan27]

This is one of the most uplifting pieces you've ever written...even though there is dark imagery within, there is a feeling in this one...I don't know if optimism is the right word, maybe motivating describes it best...whatever the case, it's beautiful work, as it always it when you write :)

[Frieda P]

I was having a moment, thanks so much Benji :-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha save one of those moments for me if you come across anymore ;P

[Frieda P]

Ha now you're pushing it... ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha not too proud to beg I guess ;P

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, I meant about having another moment, they're scarce you know ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha I know that my dear, and their scarcity rises with every passing day ;P