~Intent

~Intent

A Poem by Frieda P

Revel in your grace
take flight in the dance
bask in the sun
soak in salty sea of tears
sob for the plight
bathe in euphoria
exalt well-being,
stir in sensuality &
vital force of musicality
ascending the heavens
precious as air's
vehement breaths

Bemused poesy
staining the skin
penetrating the heart
absorbed within ardent spirit,
life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind

Ink permeates the page
floats unto the soul
of all those who listen 
intently....


© 2013 Frieda P


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The musicality of this dances off of the page. It's beauty fills the air:

Bemused poesy
staining the skin
penetrating the heart
absorbed within ardent spirit,
life revealed before our eyes
folded over neatly
waiting to be heralded
recognized by mankind

Simply gorgeous!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anne, jazzed you enjoyed this one!



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What do poetry and music have in common? They both move us......physically and emotionally!! This dances on the page...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ink permeates the page
floats unto the soul
of all those who listen
intently...

Your poetry is a balm to the weary and tortured soul, Frieda. Thank you for taking us on a stroll through serenity.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Pretty cool Frieda, I like the opening as it feels a bit like a list of affirmations or prescribed desires. Then the middle a clever description wrapped in metaphor leading to a great ending with the title as its point. Well done friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is significantly the best one i have read by you.
I believe this is where you make your mark.

Posted 11 Years Ago


life folded over neatly. What a concept. a formidable write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Seeing a lot of you today, thanks so much for the visits and your gracious review Tam...
The lines all stand alone yet are woven together to give us a picture. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille my friend..
A lyrical recipe of words and music creating breathtaking images for this world or whatever comes after (and before.) Ink can record the musical notes and the poem's words, but only a magician can make them swirl into one and light up the sky.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words minichinz, muchly appreciated...
I don't know but this sounds like a dance mostly Salsa, it is musical as well and I enjoyed reading it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Love the Salsa, thanks so much Sunshine.
Revel in your grace
take flight in the dance...

From the first lines of this piece, there is rhythm and motion - your pen sings beautifully here, Frieda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for this glowing review Rita, muchly appreciated!
This is one of the most uplifting pieces you've ever written...even though there is dark imagery within, there is a feeling in this one...I don't know if optimism is the right word, maybe motivating describes it best...whatever the case, it's beautiful work, as it always it when you write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha not too proud to beg I guess ;P
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Laughing here, I meant about having another moment, they're scarce you know ;-P
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I know that my dear, and their scarcity rises with every passing day ;P

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Added on August 23, 2013
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Tags: poetry, grace, dance, music, heart, spirit, mankind, ink

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Frieda P
Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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