Sizzler Senryu

Sizzler Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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Fever Senryu for Fukitol Frieday, enjoy!

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So, show me again

what is it you find sexy 

when I'm in the dark


© 2013 Frieda P


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Just thought you'd like to know my husband was cracking a laugh at this. He said he couldn't comment. So I will comment for him..in the dark...it doesn't matter if we are too skinny...too large...too short...too damn tall...in the dark we can all be beautiful. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha, tell hubby I said thanks muchly Muse....tis true about the dark, that's for sure, glad you two.. read more



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I like the mask...
And the song has always been a favorite of mine.
I'm afraid that's about it, Sweetie...you just ain't my type! LOL!
Very cute little Senryu. Your phone is gonna be ringing, lady!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, as long as you enjoyed, I'm jazzed Angel! ;-)
Angel

11 Years Ago

Well, after all...you are a poet ;-D
Ready for the weekend, I see! Sensual, fun, and flirty - perfect start for a few days of 'me' time

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahah rawr! Thanks Sirrah...
Again, sexual innuendo at its best. Sexy lingerie under the moonlight or the lovelorned woes of a lover alone in her darkest night?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Tai, glad you enjoyed...
Many words when I see a woman in dark.... Slim + Ravishing + Sensual + Amazing (God's Gift)..
Wow - woman is such a detailed experiment which was successfully executed and does exist.. I just can't get my eyes of - marvellous and this Senryu is amazing Freida :)
- Singh :)
P.S : Just Amazing Senryu... Loved it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Yes I did ;) Black is always appealing.......
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha it was the color black you found enticing. ;-)
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Yes and when this color black turn in dark it goes more hot ;)
Sensual... Just the right kind of thing to read before I turn in for the night ;) Subtle nuances here. The idea of a lover showing someone what they find sexy...the most vulnerable of acts, the most powerful of acts. Great write, Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Friday, here's to sweet dreams. ;-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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