Sizzler Senryu

Fever Senryu for Fukitol Frieday, enjoy!

So, show me again

what is it you find sexy 

when I'm in the dark

Author's Note

Reviews

[Muse]

Just thought you'd like to know my husband was cracking a laugh at this. He said he couldn't comment. So I will comment for him..in the dark...it doesn't matter if we are too skinny...too large...too short...too damn tall...in the dark we can all be beautiful. lol

[Frieda P]

Haha, tell hubby I said thanks muchly Muse....tis true about the dark, that's for sure, glad you two got a kick out of it!

[kublakhan27]

Wow, just wow...Mrs.R has done it again...can you hand me a smoke while I pitch this tent?

[Frieda P]

Hahahha, you're too much Benji, that's all I can say to that! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

LOL You know me Mrs.R, I'm the metaphor man ;)

[Frieda P]

I know, I saw your red cape ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha now if only I could fly ;)

[Frieda P]

Cheers, I thought you could ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yer gonna fly high, yer never gonna die, yer gonna make it if you try ;)

[Frieda P]

Haha come in here, dear boy, have a cigar ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Exactly ;) Will you have one too? ;P

[Frieda P]

Sure, why not? haha

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah I couldn't imagine us being in the same room and not smoking something ;)

[Frieda P]

Haha whatever do you mean? ;-P

[kublakhan27]

You know what I mean Mrs.R haha ;P

[Frieda P]

I'm pleading the fifth on this one hon ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha fair enough...maybe we wouldn't have anything to smoke, then we'd just spend all our time complaining about it ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha sounds vaguely familiar yep ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha or find something to do to pass the time...oooohh it has been that kind of day hasn't it? ;)

[Pryde Foltz]

Love the double entendre on this.

[Frieda P]

Glad you picked up on that Pryde...thanks muchly.

[Rita L. Sev]

A little sizzle for Frieday... :) Great senryu!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Rita, hope it heats up your night ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Great senryu freida

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby, I thought you might like this one...

[SyberRose]

Sexy Frieda...im still in my terry robe....not looking to sexy haa after reading this ha...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Oh geez Rose, you know guys will think you're sexy if you were wearing overalls!

[SyberRose]

awww thanks:)

[ANTO]

I can't wait to get home and rip the wifes panties off - they're really digging into my skin

Love the Friday night/all night feeling of this senryu Frieda

Howl....howl...howwwwwwwwlllll

[Frieda P]

Lol, love it when you howl dear! Stirring review.............................................................

[ANTO]

I used to be a werewolf but Im alright Noooowoowowwwwwwwwwwww!

[Aethereal]

This well written senryu has a double meaning which is clearly seen if written in the following way:

Please show me again
why you still find me sexy
when the lights go out.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Aethereal, you know I like to complicate things....

[Jack...]

Everything..........................................

[Frieda P]

Haha I guess that means you liked this one Jack. ;-)

[Jack...]

Yep......................

[Angel]

Jack, you are as transparent as a plate glass window...

[Jack...]

Angel, how can you tell, the lights are off and I have the curtains drawn. :)

[Angel]

LOL...some things are obvious, even in the dark.
And...well, after all, I am a poet...;-D

[Jack...]

Angel, be nice, I have a slight fever.

[Angel]

Usually, Jack, my romantic friend...;-D

[Frieda P]

I hope you don't keep repeating that whilst in the dark Angel, it'll be HE who has the headache! Lol ;-P

[Angel]

He's already got a slight fever...wouldn't wanna add a headache to his woes...poor man!

[Jack...]

In the morning, fever when you hold me tight....

[Angel]

My favorite bit of that song was always the part about Captain John and Pocohontas...

[Frieda P]

Now your fantasizing on my poem! Lol ;-)

[Angel]

Captain John loved Pocohontas...they had a very mad affair...when her Daddy tried to kill him...she hollered "Daddy, Daddy, don't you dare"...
Maybe it's that tiny drop of Indian blood my Momma insists came from my Dad's side...LOL

[Frieda P]

Were there blindfolds involved? ;-)

[Jack...]

Do I get to wear a loin cloth?

[Angel]

"He gives me fever, with his kisses, fever when he holds me tight...Fever! I'm his missus...Daddy won't you treat him right"

[Frieda P]

I can see you, ya know?! ;-)

[Jack...]

I think my fever just got hotter...

[Angel]

I like the verse with Romeo and Juliet too...of course, I've always loved Shakespeare, anyway...
read moreI like the verse with Romeo and Juliet too...of course, I've always loved Shakespeare, anyway...
"Romeo loved Juliet, Juliet she felt the same
When he put his arms around her, He said 'Julie, baby, you're my flame"

[Jack...]

I was always partial to the one with Donnie and Marie oh wait, wrong song.

[Frieda P]

Could you two get a room please!!

[Jack...]

Hey, I heard there's this hotel in Ireland that has Bijou rooms...

[Frieda P]

Cheap too ;-P

[Angel]

I'd rather stay outdoors...moonlight is sooooo sexy...especially on silver hair...

[Frieda P]

TMI ms poet! ;-) lol

[Angel]

Haven't you heard? Silver is the new blonde...
*tossing her silvery mane*

[Jack...]

Silver shimmering locks, Golden tan soft Italian skin and a Bronze God physique...the three of us go well together.

[Angel]

Which of us is the Bronze God, again??

[Jack...]

I was waiting for that.

[Angel]

I know you were...and I would never want to disappoint you, Sweetie...you know I love you!

[Tom]

Somebodies looking forward to friday night ! (Wish I was going too) !!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tom, fever can be any night ya know? ;-)

[Angel]

Don't you mean "Frieday Night", Tom?

[Tom]

Of course I did, Angel ! Perhaps it was a freudian slip ??

[Leslie Philibert]

actually, I had trouble reading the poem as I fell off my chair, I think the heating in my study is too high, could it be the picture ? like this...

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, thanks Leslie, hope you didn't hurt yourself!