Sizzler Senryu

Sizzler Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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Fever Senryu for Fukitol Frieday, enjoy!

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So, show me again

what is it you find sexy 

when I'm in the dark


© 2013 Frieda P


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Just thought you'd like to know my husband was cracking a laugh at this. He said he couldn't comment. So I will comment for him..in the dark...it doesn't matter if we are too skinny...too large...too short...too damn tall...in the dark we can all be beautiful. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha, tell hubby I said thanks muchly Muse....tis true about the dark, that's for sure, glad you two.. read more



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I bet it's your voice Frieda, but all hotness aside, this one stung the tongue and tickled the mind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


HaChaa- sultry. Love the the song too. Of course I loved the Peggy Lee song too. You are on fire these days.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thinking about my Wife, I will definitely say touch, scent, and taste.
Excellent Senryu!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Pure PERFECTION - I performed this song many time, in my bedroom, singing into a hairbrush! x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I bet you were smashing, were you blindfolded?
Thomas Fitzgerald

11 Years Ago

No but I was trust up like a turkey! lol x
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahah that's an entirely different song hon ;-P
Ohhhhlala!!!! In the dark, we all are alluring! So much said in so few words. You are on a roll tonight, GF! :) Great music to accompany your words too! Lydi***

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, thanks muchly Lydi, just a little Friday night musings! ;-)
nice.... why is it a helpless female is such a turn on? :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Mark

11 Years Ago

oh, well why don't I get a load for NJ and you can show me?
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

In your dreams hon Lol ;-P
IDK - I'm a 3 in a pak cotton clad chick I guess. Why spend all that money on stuff you can't show off at the office. At least not my office.
Such a humorous write, Frieda

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

There's a place for supermaket panties too, laughing here Tam!
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Dye
Witty! Makes me want to put on my matching outfit. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wooo Dye, you go girl! haha
Just thought you'd like to know my husband was cracking a laugh at this. He said he couldn't comment. So I will comment for him..in the dark...it doesn't matter if we are too skinny...too large...too short...too damn tall...in the dark we can all be beautiful. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha, tell hubby I said thanks muchly Muse....tis true about the dark, that's for sure, glad you two.. read more
Chuckle...that's quite a smoking hot pic there. Of course being a redhead I'm kind of biased.... What no sexy ginger in black?? Lol... Thanks for bringing the heat to Frieday! x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, couldn't find a hot redhead, but I bet there are plenty out there....thanks Red! x

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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