Poet's Senryu

3 Senryus

Burning desires~

scribbling away with no end

~a creature of pen

Once upon a time

there was no poetry here~

all good men perished

Why do you write so?

give me liberty and ink

~all is poetry~

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Could these be the silenced woes of America in its infant days, shut up by Britain before the revolutionary war started?

[Frieda P]

Intriguing review Tai...thanks muchly!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

An enjoyable grouping... For what is poetry except the blood and tears of our souls? Just a simple thing...the blood and the sweat and the freedom to be whoever we choose to be..."give me liberty and ink/all is poetry"--so absolutely right on!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Friday, jazzed you enjoyed!

[Emerald Seas]

Thoroughly enjoyed! I am partial to the first stanza, but all are well done!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Sirrah, I'm rather partial to that one too.

[lee von cleef]

Dope Dopamine Desire
tickles the tease in a brain
so we visit again and again
envious .

[Frieda P]

Ha dope, dopamine, desire, now there's a review! Thanks lee.....

[SteveB]

Count me as voting for number 2.
Nicely done

[Frieda P]

Thanks Steve, glad you enjoyed it.

[Yellow Butterfly]

I love them all Frieda but the very first one is my fav....

Nice streams of thoughts...

A joy to read :O)

[Frieda P]

I rather like that one myself YB, thanks so much... :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

can't pick a favorite, they are all excellent...

"give me liberty and give me ink"

bravo!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much jacob!

[B-poet]

I love the profound written senryu spirit you've conveyed here. Great work Frieda. A distinguished write & read. :)

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed Bpoet, thanks! :-)

[SyberRose]

You are so good at these Frieda...and that quill is the conduit to our soulfulness..enjoyed...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Yes it is exactly Rose, thanks muchly. :-)

[kublakhan27]

Okay these are officially my favourite senryu(s?) by you to date...you've capture the spirit of the poet and poetry perfectly...great stuff here Mrs.R :) xo

[Frieda P]

Wow official, now that's something, thanks Benji! xo

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure ;) xo