Poet's Senryu

3 Senryus

Burning desires~

scribbling away with no end

~a creature of pen

Once upon a time

there was no poetry here~

all good men perished

Why do you write so?

give me liberty and ink

~all is poetry~

Reviews

[Astro]

I love the line "creature of pen" in the first one, then the cleverness of the second and felt the 3rd strongest for to me it rings truest of all. "~all IS poetry~"

Well done Frieda.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, refreshing and talented and readable!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille.....

[Coyote Poetry]

"Why do you write so?
give me liberty and ink
~all is poetry~"
I agree. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I thought you might Coyote, thanks so much my friend.

[Keith]

Delightful, love the presentation / pictures as well.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Keith, glad you enjoyed.

[TL Boehm]

give me liberty and ink. all is poetry. Yes!

[Frieda P]

Ha I take it you agree, thanks T!

[emmajoy]

Each one of these is an example of what a senryu should be. Then, just to show how creative you are, you give them a common theme. Brava Petulia!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille petulia! Muchly appreciated...

[Joyce S. Greene]

Love these, Frieda, particularly the last one. How true - with freedom and a pen, life is a poem and poetry is life. Very, very nice!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Joyce, glad you enjoyed!

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Awesome! Thank you

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.....

[Rebecca Buller]

I simply loved these, Frieda. I haven't had time to write even one senryu, but yours have inspired me to get my backside into gear and start penning. Bravo, milady!

[Frieda P]

Oh good Rebecca, looking forward to it, thanks muchly!

[Rebecca Buller]

You're welcome:-)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way the three senryus form a unit, and work on the same theme....good poems

[Frieda P]

Thanks Leslie, glad you enjoyed...