~Long Pauses~

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

you give such a deep look at your passion! It's almost like memories jumping into the air. ...landing as small kisses trailing down the senses.Long pauses to let us know we are still breathing.I almost want to close the curtains as I read this for it makes me feel naked. you have done your job well here Frieda! Superb!

[Frieda P]

Oh my I almost missed this magnificent review from you Queenie, thanks so much, you've made my day more joyful!

[Aethereal]

Ah, the fires of desire inspired by the gloaming! You stoked this flame quite well using those little poetic couplets as tinder.

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed Aethereal!

[Jack...]

Absolutely beautiful. You portray love as it should be, soft, warm, delicate, tender, affectionate, passionate and beautiful and you present it to us in the most wonderful package our eyes could every dream. You, my sweet friend, give new meaning to the word "talented". Our days would be dark without precious words from you. A long pause is required to savor the thoughts and visions your poem paints in our minds today.

[Frieda P]

You always humble me with your sweet words Jack, thanks muchly.

[Cassie]

I have got a long pause after reading this wondering to myself how you do such excellent work....thank you for sharing, the poem goes well with the title. I enjoyed reading it

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Sunshine, glad you enjoyed it.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Fantastic rhythm here throughout your poem!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Beautifully written. Passionate as always.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mehak, glad you enjoyed.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

My pleasure. :)