~Long Pauses~

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

you give such a deep look at your passion! It's almost like memories jumping into the air. ...landing as small kisses trailing down the senses.Long pauses to let us know we are still breathing.I almost want to close the curtains as I read this for it makes me feel naked. you have done your job well here Frieda! Superb!

[Frieda P]

Oh my I almost missed this magnificent review from you Queenie, thanks so much, you've made my day more joyful!

[annie lee]

These are whispers in your heart, pared down to the most essential, no obfuscations or arcane phrases to cloud the beautiful sentiments here. These pictures are sepia-tones and carefully preserved. Truly wonderful.

[Frieda P]

I do love your reviews minichinz, 'sepia tones' love that....thanks so much.....

[Leslie Philibert]

this is a really fine poem, one of the best Frieda has written. Super couplet structure, sparse but full of imagery, this is exactly the style I like the most, reduced, powerful, evocative...very good.

[Frieda P]

Wow Leslie, thanks for such a gracious review....

[TL Boehm]

you had me at magnolias. An ache of a poem....really really wonderful

[Frieda P]

Magnolia's seems to be a hit, thanks Tam.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"that aspire to dusty shelves
one sweet day to revisit "
I like the above line a lot. We can revisit the good days in memory. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, my favorite is 'dusty shelves' too, glad you enjoyed.

[Keith]

Something haunting about this, beautiful memories shelved, maybe to be retrieved one day.

[Frieda P]

Glad you enjoyed Keith, thanks so much.

[Mark]

Dreams seem to be a recurring theme for you. This one is wistful and feminine. Enjoyed it :)

[Frieda P]

Awh sweet review Mark, thanks muchly :-)

[kublakhan27]

This one does have a dreamy feel to it, like a daydream...may all our dreams be freed of those dusty shelves someday, preferably sooner than late ;P Well done Mrs.R :)

[Frieda P]

Good plan Benji! Thanks my sweet friend :-)

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure as always :) xo

[Pryde Foltz]

A great book and a great glass of wine. Great poem.

[Frieda P]

What else is there Pryde, thanks....

[Rita L. Sev]

You filled all the senses in this gentle romantic poem - very nice, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Rita, jazzed you enjoyed!

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Baby.