~Long Pauses~

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

you give such a deep look at your passion! It's almost like memories jumping into the air. ...landing as small kisses trailing down the senses.Long pauses to let us know we are still breathing.I almost want to close the curtains as I read this for it makes me feel naked. you have done your job well here Frieda! Superb!

[Frieda P]

Oh my I almost missed this magnificent review from you Queenie, thanks so much, you've made my day more joyful!

[Michael G. Smith]

One thousand thoughts transfer between the long pause and are said between eyes of two lovers. You have captured some of those here.

[Frieda P]

So true, thanks again M.G.

[Butch Decatoria]

Very sexy, wow, gotta love such long pauses... Mmmm.

[Frieda P]

Ha cute review my friend, thanks muchly.

[ANTO]

I would love to be able to write like this Frieda. Its other-worldly and is more like a whisper than a shout.
X

[Frieda P]

Wow Anto, I'm more than jazzed with your kind words, thanks so much x

[ANTO]

No more than you deserve my talented friend.
X

[Frieda P]

The check is already in the post love ;-) x

[ANTO]

Well I saw him this morning and my postman is sporting a new pair of gucci's - (not really - he's as honest as the day is long) lol

[Astro]

I like the sensual feel of this one from the beginning to end with the touches upon skin, the shuddering, the blossoming and tasting of cognac. All dreamy qualities that afford long pauses, whether they come to you in memory like something taken from the shelf of experience or, whether a desire is being met by scorching delight, you've captured it all with your pen.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Astro, you actually make it sound better than my poem.....

[Astro]

Lol never, I would not want to start upstaging in reviews. It was a great poem, I just can't help myself coming off that way when I've read something that good.

[Frieda P]

If you read it from my end it has an effect, and thanks again, really appreciate it... ;-)

[Astro]

You're welcome mon chou.

[icelandicblue]

The smell of magnolias is intoxicating. Smell is such a powerful sense for memory. You are able to create such tantalizing beauty with so few words.

[Frieda P]

Yes scent does seem to take me places, thanks Anne.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel this is about someone we might not see until we are in our twilight...

meeting on the other side...

beautiful words.

[Frieda P]

thanks so much jacob...

[Emerald Seas]

Beautiful, Frieda. Expressed in soft simple breaths of whispered love, this is perfectly captured feeling.

[Frieda P]

Glad you were able to capture that feeling too Sirrah, thanks so much.

[LadySoDivine]

This was marvelous, Frieda. It was so emotional, sensual, delicate and sweet - yet passionate, powerful and vivid. You represent love as it should truly be. Some people today identify love with just plain, raw sex, when it really isn't just that. It's really amazing to see such a passionate poem with such wonderful taste put in it. Excellent job! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your sweet review LSD you've brought a smile to my face. :-)

[Troy Henson]

You describe the essence of love so well Frieda.
Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Troy, so nice of you to say...