Poetry Procure

Your ink injected into my soul

    traced a straight line to my heart

 Intoxicating mind trances

        enlightened within balladry,

                    musings heady high 

           

   Breathing in a whirlwind fire

                 heated to the core

       inhaling daydream's verse

   This addiction has no boundaries

             there is no cure for poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[Mark]

It's good to get a little glimpse into another person through their writing. I think it's very human to seek commonality, we find validation when we find another mind like our own in some way.

Words, funny how an ethereal concept can be real enough to cause emotion.

[Frieda P]

Love your review Mark, thanks so much my friend....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there's no cure for poetry, sometimes it seems no cure for writers' block..and then sometimes no cure for an obsessive muse who won't leave us alone.

no matter what...we get addicted to the medicine that is the words we write and the words we read.

jacob

[Frieda P]

So true jacob, thanks so much....

[Angel]

I love this piece!
Soo true...poetry is certianly an addiction.
Brilliant!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Angel, and thanks so much for your poetic echo to this one! xo

[Sami Khalil]

"Intoxicating mind trances

enlightened within balladry,

musings heady high




Breathing in a whirlwind fire

heated to the core

inhaling daydream's verse"
I guess poetry is one of the good addictions and might bring good fortunes for the individual and others when in inspirations it has that butterfly effect and crosses boundaries and cultures to touch the oneness of humantiy...
A splendid read and write...:)

[Frieda P]

Ahh the butterfly effect, I like that theory Sami, thanks muchly :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Cassie]

absolutely no cure and its a very good past time...

[Frieda P]

I concur Cassie, thanks muchly...

[SyberRose]

No cure for poetry or love and i listen to Cohen all the time too...i love listening to music with my earphones.

[Frieda P]

And who would want one, especially for our man? ha...thanks Rose

[Vikrantsingh]

Wonderful imagination Frieda - This main picture which you used for this poetry. She's posing just like you :P
Well about the content I really loved the 1st two lines
Your ink injected into my soul
traced a straight line to my heart
Amazing :)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Ha you think Singh, thanks for that....so happy you enjoyed my musings, sweet friend. :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Yes she does looks like you and posing exactly like you ;)
But not as beautiful as your :P
read moreYes she does looks like you and posing exactly like you ;)
But not as beautiful as your :P
- Songh :)

[Frieda P]

Lol Singh!! I just cut a big check for Angel, you're going to have to wait till next week to get paid! Lol...... ;-P

[Vikrantsingh]

Hahahahahaha as you say sweets :)

[Stella Armour]

i started reading the poem a while ago and then fell into the music of "our man "..

who could fail to be inspired...lol

[Frieda P]

...and we keep falling Stella! Thanks so much. ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Writers block is a poetic condition. Not a cure. Cute poem

[Frieda P]

Ha a poetic condition, like that Baby.

[Jack...]

It certainly does seem for some of us there is no cure for poetry and happily that is the case, especailly when it is your poetry that I have the good fortune to read. Amazing from me is quickly becoming passe, but it describes your work exactly as I see it.

"For of you comes the gift of poetry, which I happily receive"

[Frieda P]

Yes happily, I so agree....and who said that Jack? Thanks muchly my friend.

[Jack...]

I did. That is my quote.

[Frieda P]

Oh woo, an original quote from the Bas-A*s dude, ...thanks muchly Jack! ;)