~Butterfly in Heaven

A collaboration of music & poetry, piano composition by Jack, for which I will be eternally grateful. Thank you my dear friend with my whole entire heart. From me & Lee....♥♥

I am but one lone butterfly

   set forth on the sea of my accord

took flight on a moonbeams prayer

    salt had stung my fragile wings

       

sunlight had parched my soul

I wander a'flutter stormy nights

   searching for the reasons       why

      in surrender's darkness there is light

      whilst angels whisper my name,

     all the while I'm still here & there

Author's Note

Reviews

[Astro]

Gorgeous description Frieda, the imagery is of a strong metaphor steeped in personal essence. This is a beautiful piano piece as well Jack, you are a man of many talents. I can see it being played at the beginning or end of a film, or sampled to create some more contemporary music styles. Well done the both of you.

[Frieda P]

I agree, it should be a movie score, thanks so much for your lovely words Astro.

[Astro]

Thank you for yours.

[Tom]

Life can indeed seem daunting, precarious and a lonely journey at times as we make our way along but the adventure is well worth it and don't ignore your guardian angel who will be watching over you and guiding you in the right direction, if you should get lost or meander of course!

A treat of a poem and a treat to read & review, well penned lady!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tom, lots of meandering going on here, muchly appreciate your thoughts here.

[icelandicblue]

Oh Frieda,

This is so beautiful I teared up reading it. She is here with you while soaring in the heavens. Your generous love knows no bounds and she will never be forgotten. The music sounded like the dance of the butterfly, it was lovely.

[Frieda P]

I can't tell you thrilled I am you liked this one Anne, Jack's composition had me in tears, so perfect for a butterfly in heaven....thanks so much my friend!

[icelandicblue]

I did not realize until afterward that the music was composed by Jack. It complimented the poem perfectly. The entire thing touched my heart.

[Jack...]

Anne, smiling now because of you. Thank you so very much.