~Butterfly in Heaven

A collaboration of music & poetry, piano composition by Jack, for which I will be eternally grateful. Thank you my dear friend with my whole entire heart. From me & Lee....♥♥

I am but one lone butterfly

   set forth on the sea of my accord

took flight on a moonbeams prayer

    salt had stung my fragile wings

       

sunlight had parched my soul

I wander a'flutter stormy nights

   searching for the reasons       why

      in surrender's darkness there is light

      whilst angels whisper my name,

     all the while I'm still here & there

Author's Note

Reviews

[Astro]

Gorgeous description Frieda, the imagery is of a strong metaphor steeped in personal essence. This is a beautiful piano piece as well Jack, you are a man of many talents. I can see it being played at the beginning or end of a film, or sampled to create some more contemporary music styles. Well done the both of you.

[Frieda P]

I agree, it should be a movie score, thanks so much for your lovely words Astro.

[Astro]

Thank you for yours.

[Robin Thomas]

Powerful imagery -- I loved it

[rhythm&blues]

Presentation is outstanding, both poem and music work together in perfect harmony, an utterly lovely collaboration. You've both outdone yourselves here, adore the music Jack.

[teardrop]

wow such a amazing write.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This is a ballet of a wanderer....so beautiful and emotional! I can see you dancing through the,moments, hours, years, ....i've gone speechless( standing on the kitchen chair crying &clapping at the screen) It's more than exceptional! rating~pricless

[Holly Hamer]

This is so pretty and amazing. I love the imagery you create and the fantasy touch to the story. It's a beautiful thing, this is.

[Kleio13]

beautiful and you are a butterfly. I'm sorry that I havent been on here in a while.

[N!LoC]

"i'm still here and there" ... lol ... i like that part

[L.M.Warde]

I am awed by your craft. Such beautiful and intricate words are rarely seen. Your words left me entirely speechless for several moments. Thank you sincerely for posting.

[Frieda P]

I'm enthralled by your kind words, thanks so much, hope you enjoyed the beautiful music too....

[L.M.Warde]

I did, very much!

[Joyrider]

What I understand is that, this poem is about the struggles you had in your life and how you saw the light at the end of the tunnel. Correct me if I am wrong Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

Partially right shiggy, it's about my sister who's a brilliant butterfly now...thanks for your inssightful review.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

the fragility of one butterfly and the power of a God, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Thomas....