~You Crush Me~

You crush me, 

then expect me to cheer you up...

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Those two lines in conjunction with that picture have a very creative double meaning. Your poem inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer you up
someday in a cup.

[Frieda P]

Very sweet Aethereal, thanks so much for your gift, glad you enjoyed my grape musings....

[Aethereal]

Here's another gift poem for you that I just thought of:

Sour Grapes

Everything outside his box
is ignored by Mr. Fox.

All those grapes beyond his power
are ignored as splotched and sour.

[Frieda P]

Ha good one, I muchly like it, you're too clever. :-) Thanks again!

[Aethereal]

Your poems bring out the clever in me: Thanks for sharing your poems with me!

[shallimarRose]

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer you up
someday in a cup."
also a note worthy poem.. xo

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Rose!

[DrD]

You must be talking about me because you don't answer my messages. Sniff . . . .

[Frieda P]

Woo, look who's back, nice to see you on my page again....no message in my inbox from you, you're back to your old tricks already I see....thanks muchly!

[DrD]

Yeah, back and here to stay. Check out my new ones, please.

[Angel]

I want to say something profound about wine that cheers the hearts of gods and men...but I can't stop giggling long enough. This was short, sweet, to the point...and hilarious.
Now, who took my glass??

[Frieda P]

Cheers Angel, glad it made you giggle!

[B-poet]

That's the true definition of a give & take relationship in terms of grapes. lol Great work Frieda. A well written message & theme. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Bpoet, glad you like my vino musings. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Brilliant....:).............

[Frieda P]

Wooo, grazie mille! ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Grazie Mille...:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Haha, From the title not what I was expecting. Funny.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha that was the idea.....thanks Pryde.