~You Crush Me~

You crush me, 

then expect me to cheer you up...

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Those two lines in conjunction with that picture have a very creative double meaning. Your poem inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer you up
someday in a cup.

[Frieda P]

Very sweet Aethereal, thanks so much for your gift, glad you enjoyed my grape musings....

[Aethereal]

Here's another gift poem for you that I just thought of:

Sour Grapes

Everything outside his box
is ignored by Mr. Fox.

All those grapes beyond his power
are ignored as splotched and sour.

[Frieda P]

Ha good one, I muchly like it, you're too clever. :-) Thanks again!

[Aethereal]

Your poems bring out the clever in me: Thanks for sharing your poems with me!

[shallimarRose]

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer you up
someday in a cup."
also a note worthy poem.. xo

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Rose!

[ANTO]

everything about this write is intoxicating - not least its author

Well done Frieda
X

[Frieda P]

Awh you old charmer you....cheers love xo

[ANTO]

Your so welcome - I love all my friends on WC
X

[Emerald Seas]

Kids or a man - seems like they're both capable! Kids I might tolerate to a degree... The man I would crush like a bug! Lol ;)

[Frieda P]

Hahah laughing here!!

[Mark]

Kids? I like the grapes image. making some whine are we? :P

[Frieda P]

Can I have some cheese with my whine please? ;-P

[Mark]

haha I'll be right over with the limburger (sp- too lazy to look it up)

[Frieda P]

You got it right, you had to pick the stinky one right?

[Mark]

you noticed!!!! :)

[Frieda P]

Of course I noticed ;-P

[Mark]

I love you Frieda... really! Honest !

[Frieda P]

Lol are you drinking again!?

[Baby Ricochet]

Some people suck. Good poem

[Frieda P]

Ha..........

[ShelleyA]

Hi Frieda. Powerful and clever. Deep expression of emotion. Good imagery, flow and tone. These lines can be taken in many ways that makes it so expressive. Well penned and a good read. Write on!

[Frieda P]

Thanks, I figured people would twist this one to fit their own needs, thanks Shelley!

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome Frieda. Have a good night!

[Angi]

Ha! Oh, how I love this! The grapes can pay ya back, though. Killer headache this morning :/
Angi~

[Frieda P]

Seems to be a lot of that going around this morning, thanks Angi, feel better!

[Rita L. Sev]

Simply brilliant! (she says as she sips wine in a vineyard...)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, cheers Rita, didn't you have enough last night? ;-)

[Jack...]

This one was just grape (great). And the truth is amazing, can be anything and everything. Dragging down and then asking for a lift.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack, glad it took you there....

[SyberRose]

You always hurt the ones you love...mothers are like grapes for sure...we are crushed and then give
goblets of love in return haa...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha so true, takes a mom to know that one, great analogy Rose, thanks! :-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Ha ha......simplicity itself......Excellent

[Frieda P]

Grazie doc, they usually aren't that simple though, are they?!