~You Crush Me~

~You Crush Me~

A Poem by Frieda P

You crush me, 
then expect me to cheer you up...


© 2013 Frieda P


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Those two lines in conjunction with that picture have a very creative double meaning. Your poem inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer you up
someday in a cup.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Your poems bring out the clever in me: Thanks for sharing your poems with me!
shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer yo.. read more
Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Rose!



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I suppose this works with a lot of concepts; especially food, one must perish in order for another to revel in pleasure.

Posted 11 Years Ago


aww the poor grape. seriously - flesh is tastier bruised or close to the bone. fodder for bats and predators. So in love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha you crack me up, 'flesh is tastier bruised'...I'm framing this one!
OK this is brilliant words for this picture...Great job.. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks shallimar, occasionally I have my moments ;-) x
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Dye
Isn't this usually the case. LOL I like how easy it is to relate to two little lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha I thought people would relate on some level, thanks Storm....
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ron
Lol, now thats funny. I make my own but not with grapes. I make honey wine.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh honey wine sounds yummmy....thanks ron.
ron

11 Years Ago

you are most welcome. Honey wine (the way I make it) taste a lot like a white wine.
Wow black grapes - thats attracts me, I don't drink Wine... But yet they smell wonderful and tempting whilst.
Freida this one is real charm you created grapes are just fragile like us (human). Great timing and Yes! Indeed ones they are crushed they can't be restored.
Charm and great idea :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh Singh thanks so much, you're as sweet as the grape, but don't need crushing ;-)
Grazie mi.. read more
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Grazie Mille :)
Oh sweetie, you should drink some wine and give him the finger! ;)
Love this!~xoxo~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha I thought you might....we've got vino right here! Who or what is first on the agenda I wonder .. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

Ohhhh I already got rid of mine... I'm drinking the wine to celebrate! CHEERS to girl power! :D
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'll drink to that, cheers! ;-D
Oh I've been down this road so many times. You speak the truth.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I figured you could relate Tarry, thanks muchly....
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

my pleasure
Those two lines in conjunction with that picture have a very creative double meaning. Your poem inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer you up
someday in a cup.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Your poems bring out the clever in me: Thanks for sharing your poems with me!
shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Grapes

Crush me with your feet
while I'm ripe and sweet
then I'll cheer yo.. read more
Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Rose!
I hope this is not about me Mrs.R...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL............!
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha... ;P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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