Frieday's Patience Senryu....

Frieday's Patience Senryu....

A Poem by Frieda P
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Snail's pace of the cafe lately......................................

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Like wading through sludge

~get with the program WC~

poetry awaits!


© 2013 Frieda P


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"Wading through sludge" great simile here, Frieda. Unfortunately, there are so many new poems each day on WC, it is difficult to keep up with all of them. This is a good senyru. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I know, just makes it ten times harder to get to it now, thanks Lydi.
It's Friday night, woman! I have a hot date. Ha! Yeah, who am I kiddin'. Jammies and a glass..no, scratch that..and a bottle of wine are in order. That and I have some reading to do! Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Angi

11 Years Ago

Took me three tries to post that. Hrmph.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Cheers Angi, enjoy your bottle of vino, maybe you won't notice the snail's pace of this place....
i suppose its all about anticipation
what comes to he who waits, and all that

but with poetry it just don't work. even the simple stuff
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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh stop you before I sic the gremlins on your arse. ;-D
Dr. Wood ?

11 Years Ago

Sorry...I have this sarcastic gene that completely takes over....I promise to be good from now on..... read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

They have meds for sarcasm? ha
It was like this yesterday, too. Frustrating! Makes me wonder what other changes are in store... Good brief rant, Frieda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh please, nothing else in store I hope.....thanks Rita!
Yup, I agree. And where did we all go on the writers online page. Something's a foot as Sherlock would say.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Have no clue Relic, another surprise package from the cafe....
a good one and like the little icon too ha...i still can't see anyones pictures either...but at least I can go to the feed...thanks for posting frieda...Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Welcome Rose, thank you, glad you liked it, only took me two days to get back here. ;-)
We're slow in the south so we just brew tea and wait.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Excellent idea Brandon. ;-)
I clicked on this poem an hour and a half ago, just now reviewing. :)

You tell' em Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, exactly! ;-)
Love it! I don't have much time to hang out here these days so when I can login, it'd be nice if the site was working properly. Very slow and buggy lately. Hope they fix it all soon!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I know you've been scarce, nice to see you Sera, hope all is well my friend, thanks muchly!

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