~Dark Side of the Moon

Collaboration with Jack, needless to say, he's the light side.

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Stunning collaboration, Frieda and Jack both!! Both of you have composed some incredible imagery for this piece (which I happen to be partial to in poetry).

Jack, I love your "dark side," so to speak, with its "deeper shade of black devoured your soul." And just as much, Frieda, I love your "light side," with its "fireflies flicker," and "tears evaporate in reflected heat," and "dawn's sweet zephyrs on jeweled beams." What an intense combination of positive/negative images, so romantic, loving, and adventurous!!! Ooh, I'm just gushing. :-P

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed this collaboration, but Jack was the light, you know where that leaves me ;-) Thanks muchly Eric....!

[Anand Sehgal]

wonderful transformation from gray scale to color :) loved the mood

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit & review Anand, much appreciated. :-)

[Jack...]

Frieda, all I can say is you inspire me to be a better poet everyday. Thank you so much for allowing me to join you in this beautiful poem. Your talent is unending.

[Frieda P]

Jack, you bring the light and a smile to every day, thank you my sweet friend.

[annie lee]

you guys -- wow -- wow. this is sublime lyricism. I cannot fathom the depth of these words and images. The structure is incredible.

[Frieda P]

A double wow, wow, thanks so much minichinz!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.

[Sami Khalil]

A great collaboration of two minds and souls to shine the truth of the dark side of the moon and in sad tunes spread the love the ones hanging by the thread of fragility to keep the flight of hope even on fragile wings of butterflies...Awesome...:)

[Frieda P]

Jack is responsible for shining the light on the dark side...thanks Sami. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

I understand...You are welcome...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Forgotten]

Well, wow what can I say! Perfect song for this but that's the latter of this review, you two have created something amazing and perfect, you two seem to be flowing on the same wavelength here :) This flowed beautifully and the layout was appealing to the eye and interesting. I think I might have to get back into writing poetry, you two are extremely talented and I hope to be at your level one day too. Great job, I loved this, a great poem from two amazing poets

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much John, I was on the dark wave length and Jack lightened it up, thrilled you enjoyed this one...

[Forgotten]

Ah well opposites make things very interesting, light and dark go hand in hand :) And this made for an excellent poem, you two did great on this one

[Jack...]

Yeah, I used to be a pretty good poet back in the day. :) Thanks so much my friend. It is always an honor to write with such a beautiful poet.

[Forgotten]

Haha now you're pulling my leg, you're still a good poet, but I'd say that's understatement now, more like an amazing poet :) You two really are a couple of my favourite poets on this site

[Frieda P]

You'll never live that statement down John. ;-)