~Dark Side of the Moon

Collaboration with Jack, needless to say, he's the light side.

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Stunning collaboration, Frieda and Jack both!! Both of you have composed some incredible imagery for this piece (which I happen to be partial to in poetry).

Jack, I love your "dark side," so to speak, with its "deeper shade of black devoured your soul." And just as much, Frieda, I love your "light side," with its "fireflies flicker," and "tears evaporate in reflected heat," and "dawn's sweet zephyrs on jeweled beams." What an intense combination of positive/negative images, so romantic, loving, and adventurous!!! Ooh, I'm just gushing. :-P

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed this collaboration, but Jack was the light, you know where that leaves me ;-) Thanks muchly Eric....!

[Dr. Wood ?]

a marriage made in heaven I'd say....Like McCartney and Lennon...All darkness and light...Maybe you two should do this more often...collaborations look like fun

[Jack...]

Wow, the second reference to Lennon and McCartney. Frieda, I think we may have something going here.

[Frieda P]

Truly humbling....

[Dr. Wood ?]

I was referring of course to Ted McCartney and Gregory Lennon who work on the market stalls in my town...They are quite brilliant though.....Just joshing

[Jack...]

Now I can honestly write LOL and mean it. My employees are looking at me like I am looney. My friend, that was perfect.

[Frieda P]

Ha good thing you're across the pond!

[Dr. Wood ?]

I'm in me bunker as well

[Frieda P]

Your bunker, is that code for the ice cream parlor or something?

[Dr. Wood ?]

air raid shelter then...Blimey, you yanks

[Jack...]

I thought those hats were called bowlers?

[Frieda P]

Haha, love when you resort to calling us Yanks!

[Dr. Wood ?]

it is my only weapon..and now i am unarmed.....Blimey, poor Limey......Stymied

[Jack...]

Stymied huh, I always thought he was a little rascal.

[Frieda P]

Lol that should be a poem!

[Dr. Wood ?]

get out your pens Bacharach and David

[TL Boehm]

this is beautifully penned. Have you ever seen the first F'antasia by Disney and the end of it where Night on Bald mountain is coupled with Ave Maria? This is the poetic version of that masterpiece. And I found it enthralling to read.

[Frieda P]

Wow TL, I'm enthralled by your review, I somewhat recall that, it was years ago and let's just say I was under the influence of some wacky weed! ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Great collaboration you two crazy kids

[Frieda P]

Ha, you get an A+ in reviews after that 'crazy kids' statement Baby!

[Jack...]

I'll second that.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly to Jack who brought some light to my darkness, always a bright spot in my day, not to mention a superb poet and grand friend.

[Jack...]

There is not enough room in this little box for me to write how much I appreciate your friendship Frieda. You always amaze me.

[An owl on the moon]

Life is such a mix of dark and light.. night and day... winter and summer... Your collaboration speaks to the blending of all that comes into us.. all that sings through us... all that we become in the blending of the colors... This is beautifully powerful....

[Frieda P]

Your sweet words touch my heart Craig, thanks so much...

[Horizons]

I've got only one word for you "AMAZING", i've never seen before such a splendid piece. I'm flattered by your work. I enjoyed the write much.

[Frieda P]

Wow Horizons, thanks so much, I can't take full credit, Jack brought light to this piece, muchly appreciate your thoughts here!

[Leandro Mendez]

I can't say much more from all the other reviews... just an impeccable job!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Leandro, can't beat 'impeccable'!

[KeeD]

"dawn's sweet zephyrs on jeweled beams." Wow, you implement the use of my favorite word and I adore you for it.
To find such intelligent sweetness, timeless and pure i'd seek millennia a moon how ever dark.
Excellent write. :)

[Frieda P]

Funny you brought that up Kee, Jack wrote that line! I know 'zephyr's' right, ha, thanks my sweet friend!

[icelandicblue]

Oh you two certainly have created a beauty in this one. I love your two voices because they blend seamlessly in this yin and yang piece of poetry.

[Frieda P]

Thanks blue, it was effortless to have Jack's voice blend with mine...glad you enjoyed it.

[Annabelle Lee]

OMG!!!!! I read this and understood it! It wasn't someone else's beautiful dream or just beautiful words strewn across a page as most of your works seem to be to me. It was as if this could have been my own reality. I'm so sorry, but I'm glad to have finally been able to personally connect with a writing of yours rather than just admire and marvel at your poetic genius, Cause for celebration

[Jack...]

Happy you could find a connection Annabelle. It was my honor to write with Frieda.

[Frieda P]

What are you trying to say Annabelle Lee? ha...thanks so much, glad you understood this one! ;-)