Flutterby Splendor

Flutterby Splendor

A Poem by Frieda P
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Thanks noodlebumble for the fabulous pic!

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My perception is filled
               with butterfly splendor

 flutters my lashes, 
           delicacy of soft balletic wings

The heavens smiled 
              with pure graciousness of light~ 

flutterbys softly shaded my dark sight
                    so I could haltingly see,

       the stunning elegance of beauty
                stealing breath from me
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              ~an exquisite view fore my own eyes  


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Picture prompt from the lovely Sye. ♥

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And beauty sits "fore my own eyes" in the form of your poem here Dear Frieda. This had a certain softness to it, as the breeze of this butterflies wings moving freely on a warm spring day might create. Happy, I think so. Beautiful, I know so.

"My perception is filled with butterfly splendor."

This opening line is so very pure and entices the reader to not hesitate, but read on for there is beauty waiting. This was wonderful my sweet friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Leave it to Sye to find the best butterfly pics, it so moved me that I had to write something uplift.. read more



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Exquisite. A really lovely poem. Beautiful imagery and wording

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Zahra, glad you enjoyed my flutterby musings here.
Was this inspired by my butterfly experience yesterday?? It sure does describe the vision I witnessed perfectly.... Wish you could have been there. xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Noodles sent me the pic last week but it certainly could have been after that experience...still can.. read more
And beauty sits "fore my own eyes" in the form of your poem here Dear Frieda. This had a certain softness to it, as the breeze of this butterflies wings moving freely on a warm spring day might create. Happy, I think so. Beautiful, I know so.

"My perception is filled with butterfly splendor."

This opening line is so very pure and entices the reader to not hesitate, but read on for there is beauty waiting. This was wonderful my sweet friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Leave it to Sye to find the best butterfly pics, it so moved me that I had to write something uplift.. read more

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Added on August 6, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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