Flutterby Touch Haiku

Lovely butterfly

flutters the very heartstrings

magic in your touch

Author's Note

For Lee, you eternally bliss my heart ♥♥

Reviews

[ShelleyA]

Hi Frieda. A lovely write and skillfully crafted traditional haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 syllabic form. Heartfelt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling; a beautiful way to express the magic of love by the soft fluttering of a butterfly. Good word choice. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on!

[Frieda P]

Always jazzed by your in depth is reviewing Shelley, thanks so much!

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome Frieda. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have a great day!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah I wish that was how it felt right now! Nice one. And who is Lee?

[s y e]

Her sister....

[Frieda P]

My baby sister Lisa, I always called her Lee, thanks John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My mind is not in gear; of course it is!!!!!

[Karen]

I absolutely love Haiku poems, especially ones about Nature and their beauty. This one is precisely the kind I like with butterflies and magic. Beautiful poem!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words Karen, butterflies & magic, exactly.

[Sami Khalil]

Splendid , amazing , artistic , loverly...:)

[Frieda P]

As was she Sami, thanks so much :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)