Flutterby Touch Haiku

Lovely butterfly

flutters the very heartstrings

magic in your touch

Author's Note

For Lee, you eternally bliss my heart ♥♥

Reviews

[ShelleyA]

Hi Frieda. A lovely write and skillfully crafted traditional haiku. Perfect 5/7/5 syllabic form. Heartfelt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling; a beautiful way to express the magic of love by the soft fluttering of a butterfly. Good word choice. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on!

[Frieda P]

Always jazzed by your in depth is reviewing Shelley, thanks so much!

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome Frieda. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have a great day!

[TL Boehm]

Very sweet. You do butterflies so well!

[Frieda P]

Thanks T, they hold a special place in my heart.

[ANTO]

A fine haiku Frieda and a gorgeous tribute. Well done. Lucky Lee.
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revised - Frieda I humbly apologise for this 'clumsy' review and I hope you'll forgive me.
May God rest her soul in peace.
(HUGs)
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[Frieda P]

Thanks Anto, I was the lucky one, much appreciated. x

[SyberRose]

Peaceful,serene and gracefully penned Frieda...hugs

[Frieda P]

Thanks sweet Rose, glad you enjoyed this one. :-)

[Archangel Gabriel]

Rentokil. That should get rid of these pesky butterflies. Or try an antacid. Lovely as always

[Frieda P]

Don't go near my butterflies you! What the heck is Rentokil, sounds treacherous...

[Archangel Gabriel]

A company that deals with pests!

[Frieda P]

Ouchie, you scoundrel....step away from my poetry!

[An owl on the moon]

There is a sweetness of honey that glitters in each line, and the dedication brings even more delicious thoughts of bliss and beauty. Happy your heart is fluttering so... :)

[Frieda P]

Lovely sentiments, thanks so much Craig :-)

[Jack...]

My heart breaks for you Frieda, it always will.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack, keeping her spirit alive here, hopefully she can feel it....

[Jack...]

I am sure she can

[B-poet]

A lovely & inspiring haiku Freida. Great work. :) You've got the magic writing touch right now. :)

[Frieda P]

Woo magic, it must be from butterfly flutters. :-) Thanks so much Bpoet.

[s y e]

This is lovely, Frifri - another lovely write from you. Really touching as always.

[Frieda P]

Grazi mill Sye, your sweet words are always a joy to read.

[s y e]

It's always a pleasure, that's what noodlebumble is here for.

[Frieda P]

You just made my heart smile hon. :-)

[s y e]

Awwwwwah!!

[Pete Langley]

Wonderfully open sentiment with the lightest of touches, sweet thing. P.

[Frieda P]

Thanks sweet P, trying to keep her spirit alive, it's taboo around my family....