Disconnected Dreaming

Was I flying or

 was it, dying

in my dreams

          upon your soul

I was suspended in

 your lusty web

my heart and head

                                     disconnected

As I fell back to earth

 to find

there was

 no reason

           or rhyme

just shattered notions 

of love's emotions

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Whew! I hope that was wonderful dream before disconnection as we have climax after interval in every movie :P
Just kidding dearie :) this is just a traveller from one world to another and you got me travelling from place to place with your word play here :)
Simply amazing and as usual Frieda got Karizmatic way of expressing with outstanding Calibre of executing the way which you always do :)
- Singh :)
100/100..... Just give me more opportunities to read such wonderful poems from you my dear buddie :)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, that's some review Singh, I'm going to have it bronzed and hang it on my wall! ;-) Thanks muchly my sweet friend!

[Vikrantsingh]

Sure you can do one for me atleast this thing will give me some boost to review all your poetry with such better comments ;)
- Singh :)
Belated Happy Birthday :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Heartbreaking write.. the shattering of a dream, realizing that you are disconnected with the one you thought loved you.. such sadness in this poem, Frieda.. and yet, beautifully penned.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Lori, very often it's like a bad dream, glad you enjoyed this one.

[SyberRose]

Dreams have a way of playing cruel tricks on us...i like the word disconnected as we do
seem to disconnect from reality when in love...Nicely penned Frieda:)

[Frieda P]

We sure do, thanks Rose! :-)

[Troy Henson]

You have a unique way of tapping intp the dreamer inside yourself and bringing t reality deep thoughts and emotions. I sense confusion and state of lustful loss but so elequantly put together.

Very nice Sarah.

Regards
Troy

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your kind review Troy, but I'm Frieda not Sarah. :-)

[Troy Henson]

Haha OMG so sorry.....so many reviews last night and sooooo tired. My apologies.

[Frieda P]

Figured you were dreaming too. ha It's fine, you couldn't have mistaken me for a better poetess. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A good journey in your words. I like the logical ending. We learn the truth about all things in the end. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote.

[Jack...]

Dreams have a funny way of posing all sorts of questions that in most cases we find impossible to answer. Your poem asks a few of these questions, and the beauty of your words, your phrases and your overall talent answers some of my questions, but not the one I seem to ask over and over again...how do you do it? How do you take a subject that could almost be described as nightmarish and make it something so very gorgeous. I will tell you this, your poems are alway like a dream to me, the sweetest dreams i could have. Very nice my extremely talented friend.

[Frieda P]

You humble me with your kind words my friend, thanks so much Jack.