~Cathartic

~Cathartic

A Poem by Frieda P

Bare your soul,
spill your blood on white pages
relinquish tears from thine eyes
purge your sins, unburden your heart
If thy pen finds nirvana
to write the light of day,
the darkness of night 
reads a lighter shade of gray


© 2013 Frieda P


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I absolutely LOVE the last stanza! Not that the first is chopped liver; it is beautiful in its own way. But since I am a practicing Buddhist, the last stanza rings clear to me and true. Wonderful job of evoking emotions from the reader with this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I didn't know you were a Buddhist Lori, no wonder you're so serene, and thanks so much.
Ravyne Hawke

11 Years Ago

I've been practicing Buddhism for about 10 years now.. with some Hinduism, Taoism and Native America.. read more



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Ooohhhhh....brilliant!!! You don't know how much I love this!! xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woo, grazie mille Red! xo
Short and sweet. Good one Frieda

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed it Baby...thanks.
I love short poems. This is definitely a packed one. Good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm usually not so brief, glad you enjoyed this one Mark!
Wonderful work Frieda, this deserves to be in print, you could showcase your own booksigning. A fine write & read. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You humble me with your kind words Bpoet, thanks muchly! :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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