Violins & Lover's Sighs

Violins & Lover's Sighs

A Poem by Frieda P
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Collaboration with the Master of Music & Romance~Jack.

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Violins and lover's sighs
your music struck me like a thunderbolt concerto

charming was your repertoire
it left me breathless on the dance floor

I floated enchanted to your harmony
won my heart so easily in your haunting beat

Strings were taut for a firm tango
you dipped into me with a hot tempo

Breathing in chorus'd composition
an overture of bliss echoes our heartbeat
You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro
I bend to your chords with lusty allegro

As skin serenades skin
And ariose shadows move in time upon the wall

The rush in your instrument was intense
the euphony strummed us to rhythmic rapture

You transpose me upon your prelude 
soothing within a moonlit sonnet

The building crescendo of encore moans
came perfectly tuned with the pulsating ovation 




© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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A superb coalition here and the theme is just great as a musical person the theme is right up my street. Its hard to tell where Frieda stops and Jack begins and vice versa so Im happy to stop trying to look for such and just really enjoy this poem by 'Jackieda' or is 'Frijack'
Great work you two


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack...

11 Years Ago

Ok, sheesh (wotd) I will settle for Frieja.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sheesh you're easy. ;-)
ANTO

11 Years Ago

"You gotta know when to hold them...know when to fold them.....dah,dah,dah,dah,dah"
lol



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I admit my mind was wandering a little as I read this only because I so desperately want to learn how to play the cello. I can play piano, guitar and violin, but it's the cello I want to play and always have :) And knowing my ticket could be punched at any time...well let's just say I'm not taking anything for granted any more. Beautiful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I love the cello too Krisitn, have you listened to 2 cellos, they're wonderful, and thanks.
Kristin Lee

11 Years Ago

I have. They've always captivated me :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Same here. :-)
charming was your repertoire
it left me breathless on the dance floor...

I think I can say this is how your collaboration has made me feel... ;) This is a piece with whirling images, sensual and romantic at the same time.

ariose shadows move in time upon the wall - this is an awesome line - A+ for word use and imagery!

Great teamwork, Frieda and Jack!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ah - an oompa kind of mood... is that what we're calling it these days? Jack, I can hear your voice .. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rita, but fyi, I was almost in a Mummers String Band kind of mood. :)
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

LOL! Now that's the best mood to be in! :) Dancin' in those golden slippers...
WOW. Allow me to say once again, WOW. This certainly is a provocative, stirring piece of work. Kudos to both of you. This is sensuous, evocative of satin silhouettes floating, hovering just above a lustrous marble dance floor. One of my favorite pieces of classical music is "Bolero" and my reaction to your poem was the same one I have to that piece of music. wow. I need to get a cold sip of something and fan myself vigorously with a ladies' delicate little fan. Thought I was too old for that stuff. It's always nice to feel a little stirring in places one thought long exhausted.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow, two wows, thanks so much minichinz, your reaction made me smile! :-D
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Make that 3 wows. Thank you so much.
Beautiful poem ya'll. oh 25 characters my eye

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Baby, I know never get used to it....glad you enjoyed.
Jack...

11 Years Ago

I don't get it either, there are way more than 25 characters on this site at any one time...I don't .. read more
A beautiful and powerful poem. The violin is my favorite. Allow the music to control the heart and mind. The description took me in and I enjoyed the journey. I enjoyed the energy in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Mine too Coyote, it's so affecting, thanks so much for your sentiments here.
Perfect poetic pair up....not surprising though. Two of wcs most loved writers make beautiful music together. What else can I say....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks Red, but Frieda just invites me to write with her every once in a while and lets me ride on h.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Pay no attention to that man behind the curtain! Thanks Red, you know Jack is great at this sort of.. read more
A scintillating tease to the senses...beautifully penned Frieda and Jack...Loved it...Rose:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rose, glad you enjoyed this one. :-)
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rose. It just goes to show you how good a man can look when he has a beautiful woman on hi.. read more
Wow, my two favourite people did a breathtaking poem. How lucky are we? This is great, guys. I really enjoyed it, the music was perfect. The wording was spectacular, spectacular. Amazing imagery, too.

"You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro
I bend to your chords with lusty allegro"

~~ ooooooft, wow! It's a little hot in here. ;-)

If I could, I'd dance for the both of you and because this was fabby, but I can't.

~ Noodlebumble x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh thanks noodlebumble, you know I wasn't sure how it'd go with your Jackomantic... ;-) We had fun.. read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

Ahah, 'my' Jackomantic. ;-) Well I loved it, my two fave people! x
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much New Doll. Now you know, just let a beautiful butterfly land on my shoulder and even I.. read more
Wow. What a nice and lovely collaboration of poetry , music , rhythm of beautiful words and words along with the dances of the two hearts bringing us life and love to this site and above all cheers of friendship ...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack...

11 Years Ago

Psst Sami...it was mostly her. Thanks so much.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sami, he's so humble, I started it, he finished it, we made a fine team I think! ;-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

OK. You are or both welcome...:)

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