Violins & Lover's Sighs

Collaboration with the Master of Music & Romance~Jack.

Violins and lover's sighs

your music struck me like a thunderbolt concerto

charming was your repertoire

it left me breathless on the dance floor

I floated enchanted to your harmony

won my heart so easily in your haunting beat

Strings were taut for a firm tango

you dipped into me with a hot tempo

Breathing in chorus'd composition

an overture of bliss echoes our heartbeat

You play me all night long like an orchestrated Maestro

I bend to your chords with lusty allegro

As skin serenades skin

And ariose shadows move in time upon the wall

The rush in your instrument was intense

the euphony strummed us to rhythmic rapture

You transpose me upon your prelude 

soothing within a moonlit sonnet

The building crescendo of encore moans

came perfectly tuned with the pulsating ovation 

Author's Note

Reviews

[ANTO]

A superb coalition here and the theme is just great as a musical person the theme is right up my street. Its hard to tell where Frieda stops and Jack begins and vice versa so Im happy to stop trying to look for such and just really enjoy this poem by 'Jackieda' or is 'Frijack'
Great work you two

[Frieda P]

Laughing, you know I'm going to go with Friijack! Thanks my lovely friend, jazzed you enjoyed it. x

[ANTO]

I knew it as soon as I typed that .....lol
X

[Frieda P]

Ha you know me too well. ;-) x

[Jack...]

I don't know, I'm kind of partial to Jackieda. It has a nice ring to it.

[Frieda P]

Don't make me block you Jack! ;-)

[ANTO]

I wonder how Brangelina sorted theirs out..? ;)

[Frieda P]

Big bucks I'd imagine! Lol

[Jack...]

Then I'd be known as Blockieda. Still sounds good.

[Frieda P]

More like Friiblock!!

[Jack...]

Ok, sheesh (wotd) I will settle for Frieja.

[Frieda P]

Sheesh you're easy. ;-)

[ANTO]

"You gotta know when to hold them...know when to fold them.....dah,dah,dah,dah,dah"
lol

[Angel]

Whoosh...as Noodle says...it's a bit hot in here!!
Wow, you two...you really made me sweat with this write.

[Jack...]

Thank you sweet Angel. Once again you produce a smile on my face.

[Frieda P]

*Fans Angel* Thanks my friend! ;-)

[Jack...]

A truly lovely and playful collaboration between the two I adore!!! Here I see Jack's musical quality's and Frieda's lyrical ones... mixed together into one beautiful seranade... so smooth! A pure romantic, musical piece full of passion, well done the both of you! xx

- Elisa

[Jack...]

I was honored to write this with Frieda, I am happy you enjoyed it Elisa. You words are smiles to me.

I'm so happy you two did... for the cafe is a lovely place to collaborate, and it should be ... thanks for brining the vibe of "collaboration" back with this one... (did myself a few with great artists) but unpublished, for I have to edit... and overthink if I will repost them... keep collaborating always xo

[Frieda P]

You're too sweet Elisa, as always, grazie mille my dear friend. xo

Di niente cara mia... xo :))

[Frieda P]

Baci!!! xoxo :-)

[Archangel Gabriel]

Definately a melodic and sensuous piece of poetry.

[Frieda P]

Happy you enjoyed Gabriel, thanks.

[Derek Nall]

Sexy stuff! Makes me want to dance!

[Frieda P]

That was the general idea, thanks Derek!

[Blue Ivory]

I love a good collab. It's especially interesting, since it's coming from the two of you. I've seen Frieda writing about music before. But it never ceases to amuse me. This one especially was very entertaining. From the line "You play me all night long...", I started reading it with a smile on my face. That was just the highlight of the poem. That, and the first line. I really really liked the first line. It's what reeled me in to read this.

[Jack...]

Happy you smiled my friend.

[Frieda P]

Here's me smiling that you were smiling whilst you read this Siren, thanks so much. :-)

[Blue Ivory]

Smileception! (=smile inception)

[Frieda P]

Like that one muchly, adding to it vocab. ;-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"firm tango...hot tempo...lusty poem"

[Jack...]

Thanks Jacob. I begged her to let me write one with her and she finally gave in. :)

[Frieda P]

Pay him no mind jacob, thanks so much!

[carol burgess romance]

breathless.....enjoyed the entire poem.....very sensual and well done

[Jack...]

Carol, your words always make me smile.

[Frieda P]

Love breathless as a review, thanks carol.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A really sensual and eloquent collaboration!

[Jack...]

Yeah, but was it proper John? :) You see, wrap something beautiful around an ugly old goat like me and the barnyard is happy.

Thanks so much.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Words maketh the man!

[Frieda P]

Old goat my arse, you're off your rocker Jack, and thanks John, see...this one stayed posted. ;-)

[shallimarRose]

A wonderful Collaboration of two greats.. xo Rose

[Jack...]

Thanks so much sweet Rose.

[shallimarRose]

Oh you are most welcome Jack.. Can't wait to get ours started... xo

[Relic]

A stunning piece. Its good to see you both back and collaborating together. Although I just drop by to peruse, I can see the paleness that covered WC has been replaced with the color of your presence. And I mean that for both of you, you were each mentioned and missed by many.

[Jack...]

You'll never see me pass up the opportunity to write with such a beautiful and talented poetess as Frieda. I am humbled by her asking and oh so thankful she did. Thanks Relic for stopping by and perusing.