Belize State of Mind~

Belize State of Mind~

A Poem by Frieda P

In a Belize state of mind
life was piling on...
lost my head & hopped a plane
all I took were my flip flops,
ironically, there's saneness in coconuts

© 2013 Frieda P


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well this just flopped my flip or flip my flop...either way ...stilled my thoughts with coconuts...
lovin' those sunglasses....on a beach ,with a tropical drink, seeing the world in a forever blue haze
totally enjoyable mind vacation...
thank you for sharing fine lady

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What's better thank stilled thoughts with coconuts, thanks Holly....



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I loved the picture ;)
and again this is wonderful short and narrated very well :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sigh. I want to something like this. even in my head.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"You put the lime in the coconut and drink it all up" (God Bless Nilsson...lol)

Oh where was i ? Oh...I loved this Freida - just the flip-flops eh? Hmmm...
Great wee piece of escapism...
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Posted 11 Years Ago


Love that last line, it dropped on my head from the sky, and changed my outlook just like yours. Great short one Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I could use this vacation you've so eloquently penned. A wonderful relaxing image that will remain with me for days to come.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Giggle on this one. Only flip flops, hey? Dirty. lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wasting away in Margaritaville
looking for my lost shaker of salt.

Paradise may not heal a broken heart but can make it easier to deal with.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm most likely over analyzing this by stating the seductive whispers of a coconut in Belize are able to convince you to perform such atrocious actions . . . I say coconuts are evil to the core!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha what are you smoking Tai? The evil coconuts were on the other side of the island! ;-P
Tai Ryens

11 Years Ago

But coconuts are truly malicious beings to their milky core! Belize coconuts just sound to be far m.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Still laughing, I never met a coconut I didn't like. ;-P
Love it Frieda! "saneness in coconuts" perfect!
I'll bet you would be a blast on vacation! Imagine Frieda and NO inhibition! Wow! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, meet ya in the surf, we can party hardy David....put de lime in de coconut man! ;-)
Sounds like the ideal getaway! Nice little piece Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Looks like paradise, one of these days I'll get there, thanks Gabriel.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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