Certainlies Reality & Memories

I see you in the shadows,

those spaces 'tween certainlies reality & memories

 freedom of a butterfly with wings that glorify

yet, you're still a tinge of blue in my mind

the cobalt dust that coats my eyes

azure mist that shades  premonitions

I feel your heart, yet in a distance

perhaps it's the fluttering of your flight

causing the winds an abrupt change 

tsunamis's rage to gentle zephyrs light

whisper gently in the morning,

embrace my dreams at night

simple tokens of soul's remembrances

Author's Note

Wish you could be here today. ♥

Reviews

[Jack...]

As if gentle fingers reach from this page, your poem touches me in so many ways. Soft blue wings, following a breeze whispering to eternity, forever you shall be with me, forever I shall be with you. For I only need but close my eyes to see your smile, to hear your laugh and understand that missing always begins with love.

Very beautiful Frieda, the longing is evident and the love overwhelming.

[Frieda P]

Your review is poetry my friend, thanks so much Jack.

[Sami Khalil]

"I feel your heart, yet in a distance
perhaps it's the fluttering of your flight
causing the winds an abrupt change
tsunamis's rage to gentle zephyrs light
whisper gently in the morning,
embrace my dreams at night"

Beautiful and soft whispers of sentiments of love and hope to your great other whom you see him between reality and memories...Awesome...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie Mille my friend. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Gracie Mille Italiano...:)

[David Scott]

This poem and pictures bring my mind to Avy... "That Girl"... Wow. Hit me with a dart here.
I think it is for your sister, but it can translate well to any person.

[Frieda P]

Did something happen to Avy, haven't seen her around in a while? Yes, it's for Lee, I miss her, especially on days like these, her absence leaves a huge void ...thanks David.

[David Scott]

No Avy is probably doing better now than ever I would think. Just the picture and the history. She came to my mind as I read is all...
You loving memory is a tribute to your sister... She must have been as special as you are by the poetry I have seen inspired.

[Cassie]

Wow!!! that came out of me subconsciously after reading. How do you do this so excellently. This is good Frieda. good job

[Frieda P]

Wow thank you muchly Cassie!

[Emily B]

this is so lovely, it brings tears, smiles, chills

i talked to my brother the other day, the first time in maybe five years. Slow steps to begin to know one another again. We've been separate most of our adult lives.

[Frieda P]

Good luck with that Emily and thank you.

[Emily B]

maybe it will take more than luck :)

[Frieda P]

Definitely some hard work, and stickwithitall....too ;-)

[Emily B]

I think a woodchipper would be kinder :S

[Frieda P]

Ouchie! ..............

[Emily B]

it is what it is