Viva La Musica

You are the music that plays softly

          to the rhythm of my heart

nudges me awake whilst in deep slumber, 

                        kisses me gently to viva l'amore

I hear the moonlight and sunrise

                             in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality

      swaying me gently 

                           to the jazzy blues of your tempo

        in my loins I feel your upsurging heat, 

                           there is no melody quite as sharp 

cuts me to the bone in measured harmony

                  swinging soulful to the tune

                                   of classic Maestro’d overtures

              hard rock me til our fusion takes the house down

Author's Note

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Viva L'Amore :)
Amazing Frieda, this one is so true and really great -
Loved these lines
"I hear the moonlight and sunrise
in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality
swaying me gently
to the jazzy blues of your tempo
in my loins I feel your upsurging heat,
there is no melody quite as sharp"
Amazing Frieda :)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Well you know all about L'Amore, so coming from you that's a great compliment Singh! :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

;) you're welcome Frieda :D

[SyberRose]

Welcome back Frieda...and so nice to be reading your enchanting poetry again...i loved the soft prelude
of your poem to the sensuous crescendo of words to the hard rock finale....Enjoyed....Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Glad to be back Rose, thanks so much for your outstanding review :-)

[Leslie Philibert]

what I like here is the perfect enjambment, finely tuned phrases that deliver the content excellently...

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Leslie, glad you enjoyed this one.

[icelandicblue]

This tune is sultry. You orchestrate your words in a crescendo of sensuality. I loved those last two lines. You are so very versatile and always a pleasure to read.

[Frieda P]

Grazie blue, and love the word 'sultry'...so happy to be reading your reviews and poetry again.

[icelandicblue]

Nice to be back. I'm going to cull my "friends" and make this experience a bit more cozy. I want it to be fun again- not aggravating. And I know you know what I mean!

[Frieda P]

Cozy sounds like a good plan! And yeppers I sure do.

[Emily B]

reading these words makes me wish I could start my day over, there was something i forgot to do :)

[Frieda P]

Haha there's always the afternoon Emily. ;-) Thanks so much!

[Ken Simm.]

An harmonious almost acoustic piece that slowly and in a very subtle way, becomes raunchy and hard in the last line. The perfect rock anthem. Now I'm going to sit a while and recover.
Welcome back dear friend.

[Frieda P]

Laughing at 'raunchy', what a lovely word eh? ;-) Thanks, have missed you Ken.

[s y e]

This has to be one of my favourite pieces from you, Mama - simply divine and the music is awesome. Certainly goes lovely with the piece. I love how it's quite calm. Lovely job.

WOO, YOU'RE BAAAAACK!

~ Noodlebumble xo

[Frieda P]

Ha calm and me in the same sentence, that's awesomesauce love.

Thanks, what a lovely welcome back sweet Sye! xo

[s y e]

LOL, 'awesomesauce' that's better than flip flops ;-)

I'm so happy you're back... What can I say! xo

[Pete Langley]

One of your best pieces, I think....restrained and calm to begin, slowly wakening your senses, with a last line that is money.....much more cohesive, I think, because you have used sentencing rather than phrasing. P.

[Frieda P]

Well thank you muchly sweet Pete, it was worth it to come back just for that review! x

[Tai Ryens]

Nothing beats the subtle hints of erotic romance sparking within the confines of one's comfort zone, of which the partner does indeed know how to 'play' them quite perfectly. Well done.

[Frieda P]

Hi Tai, nice to read your reviews again, thought it was a fitting one to come out to 'play' in the cafe. Thanks!