Viva La Musica

Viva La Musica

A Poem by Frieda P

You are the music that plays softly
          to the rhythm of my heart

nudges me awake whilst in deep slumber, 
                        kisses me gently to viva l'amore

I hear the moonlight and sunrise
                             in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality
      swaying me gently 
                           to the jazzy blues of your tempo
        in my loins I feel your upsurging heat, 
                           there is no melody quite as sharp 

cuts me to the bone in measured harmony
                  swinging soulful to the tune
                                   of classic Maestro’d overtures
              hard rock me til our fusion takes the house down

© 2013 Frieda P


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Viva L'Amore :)
Amazing Frieda, this one is so true and really great -
Loved these lines
"I hear the moonlight and sunrise
in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality
swaying me gently
to the jazzy blues of your tempo
in my loins I feel your upsurging heat,
there is no melody quite as sharp"
Amazing Frieda :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Well you know all about L'Amore, so coming from you that's a great compliment Singh! :-)
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

;) you're welcome Frieda :D



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Return of the magic pen. Good to read you again Frieda. Nice melodic piece with a sensual touch.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie Gabriel, good to see you again too, making my way over to your page, slowly but surely....
The 'b***h' is back!!! Well hi there stranger. I see you have not lost your touch! as always flowing lines of melody in metaphors.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Pfft, remind me again what it is I like about you John! ;-P Thanks hon, missed you too....!
John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

It has not been the same without you and Jack.
You are the music that plays softly
to the rhythm of my heart...

Such a beautiful opening... This poem wraps the reader in the sounds and songs of love. I have missed your gift with imagery, Frieda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh thanks Rita, missed your knack for making me smile each day too!
i really like the idea of "hearing" the moonlight and the sunrise" rather than picturing them...

and what sounds they make.

nicely done, Frieda.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Doesn't everyone hear the moonlight? ;-) Thanks muchly jacob!
"measured harmony"...just damn beautiful!
The balance of complete delight xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie dear Poppy, so glad you enjoyed this one. xo
So happy to have you back :)

Such a lovely piece, Frieda, full of sensuous words and beautiful imagery. Definitely a favorite.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Traci, good to be back!
Rock us on and this site unto the music of love and life where you serenade us with your words . Excelllent...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

No music instruments but I'll cheer you on...lol
Gracie Mille...:)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What? How do you serenade your Southern Belle? ha... ;-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hahaha...Not getting into that ...lol
passionate. I like it. welcome back.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Mark, good to be back....
The melody of your words sings sweetly to my heart. You always seem to bring a sense of harmony to my world with your beautiful poetry. Very nice my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Jack, I was in a Belize state of mind. ;-)
hard rock me til our fusion takes the house down

Loved this line, the whole poem is so excellently done. Thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That was my favorite too, thanks Cassie!

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