Viva La Musica

You are the music that plays softly

          to the rhythm of my heart

nudges me awake whilst in deep slumber, 

                        kisses me gently to viva l'amore

I hear the moonlight and sunrise

                             in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality

      swaying me gently 

                           to the jazzy blues of your tempo

        in my loins I feel your upsurging heat, 

                           there is no melody quite as sharp 

cuts me to the bone in measured harmony

                  swinging soulful to the tune

                                   of classic Maestro’d overtures

              hard rock me til our fusion takes the house down

Author's Note

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Viva L'Amore :)
Amazing Frieda, this one is so true and really great -
Loved these lines
"I hear the moonlight and sunrise
in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality
swaying me gently
to the jazzy blues of your tempo
in my loins I feel your upsurging heat,
there is no melody quite as sharp"
Amazing Frieda :)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Well you know all about L'Amore, so coming from you that's a great compliment Singh! :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

;) you're welcome Frieda :D

[Archangel Gabriel]

Return of the magic pen. Good to read you again Frieda. Nice melodic piece with a sensual touch.

[Frieda P]

Grazie Gabriel, good to see you again too, making my way over to your page, slowly but surely....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The 'b***h' is back!!! Well hi there stranger. I see you have not lost your touch! as always flowing lines of melody in metaphors.

[Frieda P]

Pfft, remind me again what it is I like about you John! ;-P Thanks hon, missed you too....!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It has not been the same without you and Jack.

[Rita L. Sev]

You are the music that plays softly
to the rhythm of my heart...

Such a beautiful opening... This poem wraps the reader in the sounds and songs of love. I have missed your gift with imagery, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks Rita, missed your knack for making me smile each day too!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the idea of "hearing" the moonlight and the sunrise" rather than picturing them...

and what sounds they make.

nicely done, Frieda.

jacob

[Frieda P]

Doesn't everyone hear the moonlight? ;-) Thanks muchly jacob!

[Ruth]

"measured harmony"...just damn beautiful!
The balance of complete delight xx

[Frieda P]

Grazie dear Poppy, so glad you enjoyed this one. xo

[Traci]

So happy to have you back :)

Such a lovely piece, Frieda, full of sensuous words and beautiful imagery. Definitely a favorite.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Traci, good to be back!

[Sami Khalil]

Rock us on and this site unto the music of love and life where you serenade us with your words . Excelllent...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie Sami, I need backup, you play guitar or something? ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

No music instruments but I'll cheer you on...lol
Gracie Mille...:)

[Frieda P]

What? How do you serenade your Southern Belle? ha... ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Not getting into that ...lol

[Mark]

passionate. I like it. welcome back.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Mark, good to be back....

[Jack...]

The melody of your words sings sweetly to my heart. You always seem to bring a sense of harmony to my world with your beautiful poetry. Very nice my friend.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack, I was in a Belize state of mind. ;-)

[Cassie]

hard rock me til our fusion takes the house down

Loved this line, the whole poem is so excellently done. Thank you for sharing

[Frieda P]

That was my favorite too, thanks Cassie!