Viva La Musica

Viva La Musica

A Poem by Frieda P

You are the music that plays softly
          to the rhythm of my heart

nudges me awake whilst in deep slumber, 
                        kisses me gently to viva l'amore

I hear the moonlight and sunrise
                             in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality
      swaying me gently 
                           to the jazzy blues of your tempo
        in my loins I feel your upsurging heat, 
                           there is no melody quite as sharp 

cuts me to the bone in measured harmony
                  swinging soulful to the tune
                                   of classic Maestro’d overtures
              hard rock me til our fusion takes the house down

© 2013 Frieda P


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Viva L'Amore :)
Amazing Frieda, this one is so true and really great -
Loved these lines
"I hear the moonlight and sunrise
in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality
swaying me gently
to the jazzy blues of your tempo
in my loins I feel your upsurging heat,
there is no melody quite as sharp"
Amazing Frieda :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Well you know all about L'Amore, so coming from you that's a great compliment Singh! :-)
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

;) you're welcome Frieda :D



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loved it :) just loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Long live music! Love it. It is fresh, lively and fun. Not to mention filled with musical references and innuendoes. Bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Viva L'Amore :)
Amazing Frieda, this one is so true and really great -
Loved these lines
"I hear the moonlight and sunrise
in your sweet refrain

dancing me to the acoustic hymn of your sensuality
swaying me gently
to the jazzy blues of your tempo
in my loins I feel your upsurging heat,
there is no melody quite as sharp"
Amazing Frieda :)
- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Well you know all about L'Amore, so coming from you that's a great compliment Singh! :-)
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

;) you're welcome Frieda :D
rock me till our fusion takes the house down! AWESOME write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much TL!
Lovely and sensual.. the dance, the music, the romance.. wonderful all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Lori, jazzed you like this one...
I simply loved this piece, Frieda. Very, very sensual. Wayne Dyer said, "When you dance, your purpose is not to get to a certain place on the floor. It's to enjoy each step along the way." It sounds like a reference to life as well, doesn't it? Once again, my friend, your writing has made my heart sing (or rather dance). Beautiful:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rebecca, so happy to make your heart dance! :-)
Such wonderful imagery. Such a graceful and well put together piece.
To dance, to be free, to be held, softly guided around the dance floor. For that moment nothing else matters.
A wonderful write Frieda.

Regards
Troy

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Troy, love your review.
Quite erotic Frieda. If music be the food of love play on..as they say
X

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ANTO

11 Years Ago

LOL - That music you've added to this is so danceable Frieda. Reminds me of my raving days - come on.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woo somehow I knew you'd be a dancer, I'll probably lead if we hook up....just saying lol
ANTO

11 Years Ago

Grab the glow sticks Frieda and lets hit the raves
Love this metaphor. It's both sensuously sweet and hard edge physical.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Barbara, I was hoping it'd have a bit of both.
What delicious imagery! What sexy music! Everybody samba, samba, samba! And, lost in your poetry, and the sweet latin beat...I am a young girl, falling in love again! Yes...even this old lady can feel the heat...
Thank you for sharing this with me!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Young at heart is all that matters Angel, so pleased you enjoyed this one, thanks!

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