The Raven looked a bit perplexed...
'there is only one truth that does not lie' he muttered.
Butterfly responded, 'perhaps it is as beauty, my clever friend;
'tis in the eye of the beholder'
Once again the flutterby spread her magnificent wings,
- Splendid and amazing read and write :)
- Singh :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Singh, so glad you like this one, it's one of my favorites. :-)
The Raven looked a bit perplexed...
'there is only one truth that does not lie' he muttered.
Butterfly responded, 'perhaps it is as beauty, my clever friend;
'tis in the eye of the beholder'
Once again the flutterby spread her magnificent wings,
- Splendid and amazing read and write :)
- Singh :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Singh, so glad you like this one, it's one of my favorites. :-)
This is lovely, Frieda. You know I am just so relieved the raven didn't eat the butterfly. You have no idea. Perhaps I read too much dark poetry here. Even butterflies can display a certain strength
Ha, I'd have it no other way, you know the survivor site I'm on everyone refers to themselves as but.. read moreHa, I'd have it no other way, you know the survivor site I'm on everyone refers to themselves as butterfly warriors.....thanks muchly T.
11 Years Ago
so much more beautiful than blade wielding, armor plated, shrieking berserker.
11 Years Ago
Lol true that, but I've seen a few of them too, not that they're not entitled after what some have b.. read moreLol true that, but I've seen a few of them too, not that they're not entitled after what some have been through....
I love this conversation between the raven and the butterfly. The butterfly has a unique look on life having been first a caterpillar and then a butterfly. Something this poor raven will never understand.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Lori, this is one of my favorites, so happy you liked it.
"Butterfly responded, 'perhaps it is as beauty, my clever friend;
'tis in the eye of the beholder'"
I like the story and the ending in the amazing poem. I agree. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Also Happy Birthday my Poet Friend.
Coyote
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Coyote, much appreciate your sentiments and birthday wishes too.
The little butterfly is wise in his ways...
But the raven also has something to say.
There must, after all, be a final 'truth' that is 'truth' for all...or else nothing is true for anyone.
What is 'truth' after all????
Something to think about.
Beautiful write, my friend!
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11 Years Ago
There's only one real truth, no matter how we look at it, if we're totally honest with ourselves, we.. read moreThere's only one real truth, no matter how we look at it, if we're totally honest with ourselves, we realize that, thanks Angel!
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..