Shyte Senryu

For God's  sake people

do not feed the  psychopath

he shytes where he eats

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Good insight. Great job......................

[Holly Mason]

yeah but if he doesn't shyte I will never get my cousins ring back....hahahaha I keep watchin for something shiny....
what a dang needed smile...
thank you for sharing fine funny lady

[Mark]

Lol very nice. One of my all time favorite actors as well!

[ShelleyA]

Hi Frieda. A skillfully crafted traditional Senryu. Clever word play. Perfect syllabic form. Powerful image. I like the dark humor and satire. You paint a picture of his animalistic nature, living by his wits, even if he's locked up in a cage. Well penned. Write on!

[Rita L. Sev]

We all have our crazy moments - and they only get stronger when they are fed... but if we do not feed the crazy, there will certainly be less shyte to clean up! :)

[s y e]

Ha, this made me laugh in a way because it is SO true! I love how you can make such an impact with only a few lines. A powerful write, well done, Frifri.

~ Noodlebumble xo

[Angel]

Great write, Jersey!!
Alabama definitely agrees. You are right on point. He shytes where he eats, and then feeds it to his minions...and they eat it up.
And then prate about how there are none so blind as will not see...
Without realizing how ironic that even is.

But the kool aid drinkers are gonna keep on imbibing anyway...they will follow their little tin god to hell.
We tried to tell them...

[redflutterby]

Hannibal Lechter would never shyte where he ate. He would however enjoy your liver with some good wine. Oh forgot the beans.... Anyway he was a refined psychopath. Probably a wonderful dinner companion with bars separating you. ;-p.Back to reality....yes people shouldn't encourage crazy behaviour..ever!! They should consider that they will be next on the list once they rub the psychopath the wrong way....which they will. Its just a matter of time.

[Jack...]

You know, I walked on a psycho path once and you are correct, I didn't watch where I was going and had to clean my shoes before I walked into the house. Very much on point my dear friend. Maybe brown carpeting would be appropriate.

[Angel]

I see Texas has dropped by as well...
Hey, Texas...big hugs from Alabama!!!!!