Tick Toc...Time for your Hemlock

Tongue in cheek, perhaps.

Drink your Hemlock down

    as you've doled your poison out tenfold

choke on your own ignorant arrogance

     and grandiose excuse for self worth

your filthy lies caught up with you before Heaven's gate

    Angels snagged your dirty a*s before it was too late

now burn in Hell you lecherous, hostile ingrate

Cheers

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jack...]

Wow, it sounds like you added a little piss and vinegar in that glass as well. Let me see if I got the recipe correct: Use as much fresh hemlock as you can find, add a pinch of anger (a very big pinch) a huge dose of disgust (you have plenty of that) mix it up nicely in a dirty mason jar and tell the old country hick it's moonshine, and your job is done?

[Frieda P]

Yep, sick of all the white flag, I'm John Lennon, peace bullshyte...whilst he spreads his filth to others, sick thing is I thought of him as a friend, that'll learn me!

[Rita L. Sev]

No sunshine or lollipops in this write - the anger oozes here, Frieda.
Is there an end to the bitter taste in all our mouths...?

Remind me to never piss you off! ;)

[Frieda P]

Nope, no sunshine, you can only push me so far, I ignored it for a long time, but I won't have my name dragged through the mud, or let lies be spread here....sorry Rita, write me a happy poem will ya please? ;-)

[Rita L. Sev]

I feel another ill wind is blowing at the W, and boy, does it stink... I'll get right on that happy poem! :)

[Frieda P]

Good, let me know when it's baked my friend! :-)

[KAOlmsted]

Business as usual then, is it? ;-) This is really good. My only b***h would be you're playing too fast and loose with the "dirty"...you've got it in two lines in a row...can't one of them be "filthy"? I like filthy...filthy makes me feel...dirty *laugh* Still...100/100 mon amie

[Frieda P]

Laughing, like I said, welcome back! Ha, I wrote that in all of two minutes I think...dirty was stuck in my head, but filthy will certainly work! Thanks, what did I do without you here? See? MWAH!

[Frieda P]

Finito! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Nice! :-D My pleasure, of course...and thanks ;-)

[Angel]

Wow, Frieda...I absolutely LOVE this!!!!!
And...thank you.

[Frieda P]

Not letting the bat shyte lying lunatic get away with his disgusting rants any longer, and you're quite welcome, if I could have only warned you, he'd escaped his straitjacket! Thanks Angel.

[Angel]

He is only hurting himself. I actually feel sorry for him...but not sorry enough to ever be his friend again.
I'm just glad I found out in time...

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa. What a powerful rant for someone who pissed you off immensely. Strong language and a sharp attack...I like the satire in it too...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha pissed off is truly an understatement dear Sami, the lying leech deserves so much worse....just saying ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa...I'm running for cover...You are welcome...:)

[Frieda P]

I doubt in a million years you could be that devious or underhanded, you are safe my friend. ;-P

[Sami Khalil]

I know . I was just kidding . You know me...Have a great one...:)

[Frieda P]

Yes I do, thanks again Switzerland ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You can't forget that ...Lol
I might have to move there...lol

[Frieda P]

Hahaha I thought you had already ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

In the spirit...lol............