Tick Toc...Time for your Hemlock

Tongue in cheek, perhaps.

Drink your Hemlock down

    as you've doled your poison out tenfold

choke on your own ignorant arrogance

     and grandiose excuse for self worth

your filthy lies caught up with you before Heaven's gate

    Angels snagged your dirty a*s before it was too late

now burn in Hell you lecherous, hostile ingrate

Cheers

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jack...]

Wow, it sounds like you added a little piss and vinegar in that glass as well. Let me see if I got the recipe correct: Use as much fresh hemlock as you can find, add a pinch of anger (a very big pinch) a huge dose of disgust (you have plenty of that) mix it up nicely in a dirty mason jar and tell the old country hick it's moonshine, and your job is done?

[Frieda P]

Yep, sick of all the white flag, I'm John Lennon, peace bullshyte...whilst he spreads his filth to others, sick thing is I thought of him as a friend, that'll learn me!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now my dear you have your editor in chief to thank for rescuing you from the torpor of the mundane. Repeat words are a killer lol. Nice little rant at he who must not be named!

[Frieda P]

I know, I'm not a fan of repeat words myself, was a bit out of my head, thanks John!

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Whoa! Whoever that glass is for better watch out... sounds like you added shards of glass in with all of that. lol That was keeping in real for your a#*!! Great write tho!

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, I didn't think you could see the shards! :-) Thanks hero!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I spotted them. lol I could feel the anger of this write, it was refreshing tho... maybe because I didn't have to drink from that glass. haha

[Frieda P]

Ha, you actually made me laugh today, and I didn't think that possible, thanks!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

You are most welcome, I'm glad I could raise some laughter where it may have been needed.

[Traci]

You're on a roll today, dear sweet Frieda. Remind me to stay on your good side. Another great write, full of animosity, anger, and a whole lot of humor. Keep them coming.....

[Frieda P]

It takes an awful lot to get me to that point, once there, there's no turning back, thanks Traci, and it's all good. :-)

[Traci]

You're quite welcome. And I understand, that's where poetry comes in...a good therapeutic release.

[Frieda P]

Yes and much cheaper than therapy :-)

[Traci]

Most definitely!

[Baby Ricochet]

I enlisted. Greatest decision I ever made. Loved this poem. Great work Frieda

[Frieda P]

Not sure what that means, I must need another cuppa, thanks Mark.

[Kristin Lee]

dude...are you sure this was tongue in cheek? LOL Some serious animosity in those words. But for all it's darkness I like it :)

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, ha...busted! Thanks Kristin ;-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fierce piece my darling, I must call round for drinks! x

[Frieda P]

I'll make yours special love :-) x

[Mark]

yummy... *cough* more ice please?

[Frieda P]

Haha, do you need the Heimlich Mark? :-)

[Mark]

Go for it baby!

[Stella Armour]

i know i haven't been around much lately.. but i never expected this sort of welcome..lol

[Frieda P]

Haha, you kill me, I lub you Stella! ;-)

[Stella Armour]

you too, and your wicked humour...

[s y e]

Hahaha, I want this recipe! I think you should make this and sell it, but make it so it's worse than anything in the world.... Haha. I'd love to see their faces when they drink it. Nice, powerful write.

~ Noodlebumble

[Frieda P]

Metaphorically mixed with beer, yep. ;-)

[s y e]

Ha, of course!