Tick Toc...Time for your Hemlock

Tick Toc...Time for your Hemlock

A Poem by Frieda P
"

Tongue in cheek, perhaps.

"
Drink your Hemlock down
    as you've doled your poison out tenfold
choke on your own ignorant arrogance
     and grandiose excuse for self worth
your filthy lies caught up with you before Heaven's gate
    Angels snagged your dirty a*s before it was too late
now burn in Hell you lecherous, hostile ingrate
Cheers

© 2013 Frieda P


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Wow, it sounds like you added a little piss and vinegar in that glass as well. Let me see if I got the recipe correct: Use as much fresh hemlock as you can find, add a pinch of anger (a very big pinch) a huge dose of disgust (you have plenty of that) mix it up nicely in a dirty mason jar and tell the old country hick it's moonshine, and your job is done?

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yep, sick of all the white flag, I'm John Lennon, peace bullshyte...whilst he spreads his filth to o.. read more



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I love that word, lecherous.
My evil twisted sister. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Yes, like Rene said you're the evil sexy one.
I'm cute but deadly. :-)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What a team eh? ;)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Why can't I be cute? hahah
Frieda, it's not good for you to hold it all in. Lol. Bitingly witty.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha perhaps next time Pryde. Takes a lot for me to get to this point, but once I get there, watch ou.. read more
Wow. You HAVE to feel better after spitting that out. Very powerful stuff in very few words. Nice job lady

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha, can you tell I was pissed when I wrote this one....thanks Keely.
I'll pass but thanks for the offer lol. You are really good Frieda. I'm always telling my students, "use your words." You use yours quite well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I detect no tongue-in-cheekness in this piece...it's raw and unforgiving, as it should be when dealing with such a person, for you know that person would be the same way with you...powerful stuff Mrs.R.

Posted 11 Years Ago


OUCH! Don't hold back, tell us what you think. This reminded me of a description of Irish diplomacy - the art of telling someone to go to hell in such a way that they look forward to the trip.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh Poison! I won't try that.. Kidding.. This is very touchy and really loved it :)

Thank you Fredia :)

- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha not for you my friend, I'll make you a cuppa Cheers :-)
I think you`re talking to a mosquito that bit you and you`ve just splatted it with a newspaper! The biter bit, eh?....and with such venom! Haha ha! P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I never did like those nasty blood suckers, thanks Pete!
This is such a nice poem with some truth about people who lie, their lies will catch up with them someday.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your insightful review Cassie, and one can only hope....
I would be surprised if you hadn't read (or watched) Hemlock Grove; you capture the very predicament of the novel well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No I haven't Tai, just know that Hemlock is poisonous, but will try to catch that one.

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