Tick Toc...Time for your Hemlock

Tongue in cheek, perhaps.

Drink your Hemlock down

    as you've doled your poison out tenfold

choke on your own ignorant arrogance

     and grandiose excuse for self worth

your filthy lies caught up with you before Heaven's gate

    Angels snagged your dirty a*s before it was too late

now burn in Hell you lecherous, hostile ingrate

Cheers

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jack...]

Wow, it sounds like you added a little piss and vinegar in that glass as well. Let me see if I got the recipe correct: Use as much fresh hemlock as you can find, add a pinch of anger (a very big pinch) a huge dose of disgust (you have plenty of that) mix it up nicely in a dirty mason jar and tell the old country hick it's moonshine, and your job is done?

[Frieda P]

Yep, sick of all the white flag, I'm John Lennon, peace bullshyte...whilst he spreads his filth to others, sick thing is I thought of him as a friend, that'll learn me!

[Matching Socks]

I love that word, lecherous.
My evil twisted sister. :-)

[Frieda P]

Ha I told you, you were nicer than moi, I'm apparently the evil twin lol :)

[Matching Socks]

Yes, like Rene said you're the evil sexy one.
I'm cute but deadly. :-)

[Frieda P]

What a team eh? ;)

[Frieda P]

Why can't I be cute? hahah

[Pryde Foltz]

Frieda, it's not good for you to hold it all in. Lol. Bitingly witty.

[Frieda P]

Ha perhaps next time Pryde. Takes a lot for me to get to this point, but once I get there, watch out...haha

[KeelyJane]

Wow. You HAVE to feel better after spitting that out. Very powerful stuff in very few words. Nice job lady

[Frieda P]

Haha, can you tell I was pissed when I wrote this one....thanks Keely.

[icelandicblue]

I'll pass but thanks for the offer lol. You are really good Frieda. I'm always telling my students, "use your words." You use yours quite well.

[kublakhan27]

I detect no tongue-in-cheekness in this piece...it's raw and unforgiving, as it should be when dealing with such a person, for you know that person would be the same way with you...powerful stuff Mrs.R.

[SteveB]

OUCH! Don't hold back, tell us what you think. This reminded me of a description of Irish diplomacy - the art of telling someone to go to hell in such a way that they look forward to the trip.

[Vikrantsingh]

Oh Poison! I won't try that.. Kidding.. This is very touchy and really loved it :)

Thank you Fredia :)

- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Ha not for you my friend, I'll make you a cuppa Cheers :-)

[Pete Langley]

I think you`re talking to a mosquito that bit you and you`ve just splatted it with a newspaper! The biter bit, eh?....and with such venom! Haha ha! P.

[Frieda P]

I never did like those nasty blood suckers, thanks Pete!

[Cassie]

This is such a nice poem with some truth about people who lie, their lies will catch up with them someday.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your insightful review Cassie, and one can only hope....

[Tai Ryens]

I would be surprised if you hadn't read (or watched) Hemlock Grove; you capture the very predicament of the novel well.

[Frieda P]

No I haven't Tai, just know that Hemlock is poisonous, but will try to catch that one.