Dining with a Side of Heimlich

Dining with a Side of Heimlich

A Poem by Frieda P
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Burnt offerings.

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The words and feelings that are sorted jambalaya
     like a slow cooker they steam and churn
burnt offerings of the most selective cuts
      adding spice and touches of old seeping memories
there seems to be no end to the feast of negativity
       written in crocks of smiles, still can't toast it just right
when you've been half baked and fried to death
     roasting at excessive high heat and drenched in hot sauce
             it's hard to swallow the sweet essence of life's flavors
serve it up with crusty bread and wine to the guests
          they have no clue what they've imbibed
would they choke on the horse of a different color
          if they knew they just dined on sacrificial lamb
supper is tastefully served with a side order of Heimlich 

© 2013 Frieda P


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What a powerful metaphor Frieda. Have you ever seen the movie Something to talk About? There is a scene where Julia Roberts talks about sitting their politely smiling while she is served up copious amounts of BS, like a good southern girl. There are times you need the Heimlich indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DCT ponderings

11 Years Ago

I'm from Philly so I know you Miss Italiano. You dish it up passionately, loudly and without abandon.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ciao neighbor, so you do know :-)
DCT ponderings

11 Years Ago

si si! :))



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Frieda! i discovered how to view the list of all the RR i missed and am "catching up" ... i am actually glad i missed these poems of yours ..it is like knocking on an old friend's door to have coffee .. your titles are precious ..can't get any more distinctly "you" :))
the satire is biting .. content is delicious ...but must be well masticated :} love and healthy toasting says i!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I always love your vocabulary. You have a magnificent way with word my friend. Lovely poem, as always.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Once again, an excellent write, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh the fickle palate, well done. I like how you illustrate how just like taste we can become accustomed to something we were never impressed by before, and how hard it is sometimes to go back to the way things were or, enjoy sweetness after so much sour. Good one Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh how I wish to revel in the darkness of it all! I love this one Frieda. You command amazing dark lingering's in this one that feel like old friends all seated around the table.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The diversity of your poetic voice is always something I will admire...I have a diversity of voices, which is not the same thing...I always know when I'm reading your work though, even if I don't see the name...what more can I say, powerful stuff here my dear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A power and metaphorical piece.
Nice work.
Troy

Posted 11 Years Ago


A manoeuvre with consequences for the digestive system Freida!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's why we provide the Heimlich sir :-)
Archangel Gabriel

11 Years Ago

Kneel wench!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sassy angel, aren't cha?
...adding spice and touches of old seeping memories
there seems to be no end to the feast of negativity

You've served us a truly delectable metaphorical piece on a silver platter, milady. But I'll admit I've never tried lamb. I'm from the South so we eat more beef:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow, no lamb in the south....my favorite, not the sacrificial kind of course, thanks Rebecca :-)
Rebecca Buller

11 Years Ago

We do have lamb, but it still remains on my "Foods I Haven't Tried Yet" list:)
A satirical piece I have read which is cleverly compared to a supper as a feast of negativity. A Heimlich is really apt for that meal. Lol.

You're so witty, Frieda.

Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wit because it's illegal to hit people over the head, haha, thanks, glad you saw the humor in this p.. read more

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