Rain Dancin' Senryu

Rain Dancin' Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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Perhaps some reverse rain dancin' will get rid of all this weather....

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splish splashin' through life

my soul dances in the rain

tapping sun showers


© 2013 Frieda P


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love this..it made me happy and i love being in the rain...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh wow I love this!
This is wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The 'high' of dancing in the rain is quite something! Charming lines :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gonna go get some tap shoes right now, to get this rain outta here... Great short piece, Frieda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


"It's raining men! Hallelujah it's raining men!"

Haha, I loved this! It was short and quirky!

~ Noodlebumble.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I'm singing in the rain, just singing..."

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this and the photos...I should have borrowed that umbrella for my raindrops poem ha.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great senryu and image. 'tapping sun showers', very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think we call this a "Sun Dance"... Ha.
I love walking in the rain. I still go out at times when it is storming and just let the world soak in. It is refreshing.
Thank you for this little dance.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I concur, nothing like it to cleanse the soul, it's extra fun when you have a partner, thanks for st.. read more
Let the puddles be our dance floor and we shall move to the melody of a summer shower. Very nice Frieda. Actually very beautiful and the thought of it is dreamlike.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Always so kind Jack, thanks, glad you enjoyed my little rain dance.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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