~~Le Petit Mort

translation~the little death

dreamers floating on starlit cotton candy half way to the moon

signs of celestial bodies memories flaming in unison

lost in a trance of artistic delight of tenuous heights

wanderers meet on a plain halfway between nirvana

thunderous roar of passion's brazen bounties

no words to explain the shadow dance of aching 

falling to earth in pools of sinful ecstatic pleasure 

a small death of harmonious concourse to heaven's gates

Author's Note

Reviews

[WILDERNESS]

Lady................in which part of the world do such things happen ................ pl share the secret to such ecstasy :)

[Angi]

Ummm, I'll have one (or a dozen, I'm not picky) of these, please. yes. Yes. YES! Angi~

[Frieda P]

Whoa, a dozen, I hope you had your Wheaties this morning. ;-) Thanks Angi.

[Angi]

Heh heh! ;P

[Frieda P]

The quiet ones..... ;-P

[Angi]

Ha! Coffe from the nose. Coffee from the nose. *Sputter~sputter*

[Frieda P]

Lmao! .............

[Angi]

You aughta know better by now, Ms. Frieda. Tsk. tsk.

[Frieda P]

pfft Angi, you keep forgetting I'm president of the I Never Learn Club ;-)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Wow, Frieda. You express with such passion an emotion foreign to me, yet stirs within. Splendid read and write.

[Frieda P]

Foreign? I doubt that, you're too passionate, thanks for the great review Brandon.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

my pleasure...:)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Sensual ecstatic experience.Beautiful write.I especially like the first lines " dreamers floating on starlit cotton
candy half way to the moon
signs of celestial bodies memories
flaming in unison"

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Nkosana, I'd forgotten how much I like this music, appreciate the pause & review.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

my pleasure :)

[Frieda P]

Will visit your page soon my friend :-)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Looking foward to that :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Looking foward to that

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Looking foward to that :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Looking foward to that :)

[Kristin Lee]

Wow, this is fantastic. The words are so enjoyable. Each one lifted me up to fall dangerously and playfully back into the next. Great job!

[Frieda P]

Woo that sounds like more fun than my poem Kristin! :-)

Thanks muchly.

[Troy Henson]

Nice read Frieda. Great poetic imagery here.
Regards
troy

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Well, I've never thought of IT in quite this way, but next time that IT happens I shall certainly be thinking of this piece. Such beautiful imagery and word choice; I'm in the sublime nexus of satisfaction right now...thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, my kids used to call it 'it'....! Thanks so much Friday. ;-)

[Cassie]

I love this and the choice of words. Enjoyed reading

[Frieda P]

Thanks Cassie, glad you enjoyed this one. :-)

[Shaun Payton]

Frieda, I love this piece of poetry! The senses urging, the pulse surging.

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks so much Shaun...I love the music, glad you enjoyed!

[Shaun Payton]

:) You are most welcome Frieda!!

[Frieda P]

:-) rolling my eyes @ 10 more characters!

[Shaun Payton]

Lol yeah or ............... lol