If Only...

If Only...

A Poem by Frieda P
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daydreaming whimsy

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If only, 
 petals of poppies should really dance on zephyrs glances
         and peonies twirl polka dot dresses on high
butterflies sing lullaby's of purple essence song
     waterfalls would spray bliss while humming in tune
     secret gardens would hold the power of the universe in tiny buds
spilling forth the wonders of the world in wee dew drops from above
     if only the starlight in your eyes of the dance of romantic 
          whimsy were real horizons & the dream I dream of you could come true
I could die if only to live my life in this kismet

if only...*sigh*

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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If only, well who's to say they can't...those dreams, those fantasies, those heart shaped wishes can't come true. I for one say they can, if we just do not give up, keep pulling that lasso in a little bit closer each day. I am a believer that "if only" means "it will", if it is something I really want. Frieda, your charm and your heart always show through in the beauty of your words. This was gorgeous, as is the poet. Very nice my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks my sweet friend, and to that I have to say 'if only'. :-)
shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

If only....?



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Such a deeply felt wistfulness, the kind that turns into the blood in your veins and the air you breathe. Really lovely poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed my daydreaming J_Star, thanks for your visit & review, much appreciated.
How utterly beautiful. If only...those words can kill you at times. Your poem, however, captures rapturous images that beckon us to experience more than once. I just loved your "zephyrs glances," so poetically unique just like you. ; )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I know right? How often do I say 'if only'....glad you liked my little whimsical dream here, you're.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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