If Only...

daydreaming whimsy

If only, 

 petals of poppies should really dance on zephyrs glances

         and peonies twirl polka dot dresses on high

butterflies sing lullaby's of purple essence song

     waterfalls would spray bliss while humming in tune

     secret gardens would hold the power of the universe in tiny buds

spilling forth the wonders of the world in wee dew drops from above

     if only the starlight in your eyes of the dance of romantic 

          whimsy were real horizons & the dream I dream of you could come true

I could die if only to live my life in this kismet

if only...*sigh*

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

If only, well who's to say they can't...those dreams, those fantasies, those heart shaped wishes can't come true. I for one say they can, if we just do not give up, keep pulling that lasso in a little bit closer each day. I am a believer that "if only" means "it will", if it is something I really want. Frieda, your charm and your heart always show through in the beauty of your words. This was gorgeous, as is the poet. Very nice my friend.

[Frieda P]

Thanks my sweet friend, and to that I have to say 'if only'. :-)

[shallimarRose]

If only....?

[Ruth]

Sweet Goddess...good to read you again ;) This is blissful and so longing, felt in the heart and relished by the mind :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Awesome poetry dearie :)
Loved it simple and dream an little dream of me :)

Loved it :)
- Singh :)

[shallimarRose]

Lovely poem Frieda.. Rose

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

If wishes were horses, beggers might ride. I appereciate your use of imgery. It paint a picture in a memory. Well done.

[rhythm&blues]

Very sweet thoughts, made me smile, always love your work.

[SteveB]

A lovely wistful write. Nicely done.

[Tai Ryens]

I can't help but imagine an ethereal realm in which when flowers bloom the petals break off to dance in the clouds.

[Astro]

Great whimsy Frieda, it skirts cliched legs but dresses itself up nicely in a Frieda frock complete with polka dots and a perfume that could only be made in a secret garden, that once inhaled might just enchant like humming waterfalls and poppy petals floating on a playful zephyr....if only kismet looked your way.

[N!LoC]

ok this one seems different from all the other frieda poems u have written.. (mainly because its easy for me to understand it) lol

[Troy Henson]

If I could Frieda offer a few affirmations I have created.....
"Live in fera of failing or fail to live in fear"
"Impossible is a notion left reserved for those that dont believe"
"Follow adream, live for the moment, be you for you"
"Dont let emotion beat you, use emotion to achive what you saw to be the unachievable"

Life is what we make of it Frieda and if we can believe in what we imagine then who knows what the outcome will be.

Great piece .
Regards
Troy