Repellent

Instant repel....

    Crows nipping butterfly wings

treacherous, leacherous bandit

defiled ravine of poppies

            wake up and smell the roses

darkest hours come pre-dawning 

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

This is one of those that could mean so much to so many. Evil consuming beauty. Nature red in tooth and claw. Opposites attract but maybe not for the right reasons. Your ways of fitting such complexity into minimalist but beautiful poetry astounds me.

[Frieda P]

I'm astounded by your words Ken, you humble me, and also made my day, thanks so much....

[s y e]

This is one of these writes from you that has so many meanings. It can be interpreted in so many ways by different people. This is pure beauty, Frifri. I loved it as always. The way your write this with such honesty and passion. Opposites may attract but sometimes it's for all the wrong reasons. It's like you hear girls that go with 'bad boys' or 'players' 'cause they say all the right things. I'm rambling, sorry.

Awesome blossom.

~ Noodlebumble

[Frieda P]

Thanks noodlebumble, ramble away

[s y e]

Hahaha, don't say that or I will xD

[Sami Khalil]

"
Crows nipping butterfly wings

treacherous,"
I take it as crows are the metaphor for evil or treacherous characters who are harming the butterfly ( a metaphor for innocence and beauty ) with all their evil ways and wicked schemes...I sense sadness in this write too...:)

[Frieda P]

Take it anyway you want hon, once I put it out there, it's yours :-) Thanks Sami...

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Thank you kindly...:)

[Frieda P]

;-) oi with these characters!..............

[Sami Khalil]

That is so true....:)

[Frieda P]

the repellent or the characters? ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

I hope you have some mace or a strong repellent for them , if it does not work call Jack...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha ha...What is Jack the specialist or something?

[Sami Khalil]

Body guard I guess ...Just kidding...:)

[Frieda P]

I'm an Italian woman, do I look like I need a body guard? ;-P

[Sami Khalil]

I did not think about that...You are right...Gracie Mille...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha, I thought you knew better, I'm sure your southern belle can take care of herself too ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. Tough women here indeed...I dare not...lol

[Traci]

Complex but beautiful, open to interpretation, which is the true beauty of poetry. Well penned, my friend.

[Frieda P]

Indeed it is Traci, thank you kindly.