Super MOON Haiku
A Poem by
Frieda P
closest and largest full moon of the year
I could have touched you
with your face lit so brightly
awed in your splendor
© 2013 Frieda P
Author's Note
The April 24, 2013 almost full moon as captured by EarthSky friend Steve Pauken in Arizona.
Reviews
Ahhhhhh! It's supposed to be the biggest Moon tonight for us, my Gran and I will be on the sofa looking out for it, haha. Or as usual I'll be sitting on the counter look out the kitchen window! LOL. The Moon is amazing, Frifri ~ I love it just like I loved this stunning piece from you.
I love the way in only three lines your poem really stands out.
¡ɯossolq ǝɯosǝʍ∀
~ Noodle.
Posted 11 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
We had the fullest and brightest full moon that I've seen in quite some time last night...not sure if it had anything to do with the beginning of Summer or the fact that there wasn't a cloud in the sky...it was nice whatever the case...this pretty much sums up how I felt ;P
Posted 11 Years Ago
We had the fullest and brightest full moon that I've seen in quite some time last night...not sure if it had anything to do with the beginning of Summer or the fact that there wasn't a cloud in the sky...it was nice whatever the case...this pretty much sums up how I felt ;P
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I agree with the words in the poem. Sometimes the moon can steal our thoughts and vision. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
I agree with the words in the poem. Sometimes the moon can steal our thoughts and vision. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
What a beautiful sight it is.... And the haiku is pretty good as well!! Ha...
Posted 11 Years Ago
What a beautiful sight it is.... And the haiku is pretty good as well!! Ha...
It was quiet a spectacular sight and your haiku is impressive.
Posted 11 Years Ago
It was quiet a spectacular sight and your haiku is impressive.
Super haiku to hail the super moon - both are impressive works of art!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Super haiku to hail the super moon - both are impressive works of art!
I love full moons and you made her look brighter...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I love full moons and you made her look brighter...:)
Wonderful! So nice Haiku, Frieda. I love the moon in its full phase. Yes, looks like closest to us and seems we can hold it.
Short but splendid piece.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wonderful! So nice Haiku, Frieda. I love the moon in its full phase. Yes, looks like closest to us and seems we can hold it.
Short but splendid piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Dhaye, glad you enjoyed it, love the new pic!
11 Years Ago
You're welcome. And thanks for the compliment about the new pic/avatar. :)
11 Years Ago
Welcome too, lovely smile :-)
Twenty-five characters love your poem and I am one of these characters. The moon, beautiful words and a fantastic poet, who could ask for more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Twenty-five characters love your poem and I am one of these characters. The moon, beautiful words and a fantastic poet, who could ask for more.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Lol, you are like 25 characters Jack!
11 Years Ago
Which one do you like the best?
11 Years Ago
I can't choose, they're all quite interesting!
11 Years Ago
Did you notice the one who looks like Clive Owen?
i would want to see the super moon in its splendor..too bad, it's raining in here. lovely piece.
Posted 11 Years Ago
i would want to see the super moon in its splendor..too bad, it's raining in here. lovely piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Awh, that's too bad, could always clear up, thanks gabrielle....
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Frieda P NJ
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